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The Human Soul


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Written by hannah   
Monday, 08 September 2008
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Feathers doesn't glide in the sunlight anymore.

You and I see many creators of destruction.

Destined to be in chaos forevermore.

Yet nobody ever tries to make a motion

To stop this from becoming an eternal hell.

 

Send some goodness down

There's one in each one of us.

Take it in

To purify this world.

Tell me if it's still nonexistent.

 

A pot of gold lies elsewhere.

Criminals have risen to the highest power.

Can people possibly see what's going on out there?

The sweetest things turning into sour.

This world is waiting for an angel to come.

 

The goodness of oneself

is enough to soften the human soul.

Yet we take it for granted.

 

 

 

 

 



Copyright 2008 hannah
Keyword: the truth
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Comments (8)
Posted by Pilgrim
2008-09-08 17:39:19
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This was pretty good.

Hey, maybe you can be that angel. Well, maybe we can all be that angel. I guess that's a matter of choice though. Did you mean criminals "have" risen?

Keep it up.
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Posted by harmattan
2008-09-08 18:28:58
Human

I am repeating a recent comment.

This idea is one of the greatest ideas in the world.

Good can only prevail if most people are good. And I mean to each other, not some "society" or "politic" concept of good, but the basic morality inherent in humans before nurture takes its toll.

Media, i.e. big business, is in charge of the nurturing but only because we have let it take charge. It is time to spit out that poison milk and accept it no more. It was time to do that twenty years ago. But the advent was insidiously so attractive to too many.

It will be a long hard slog, as this is a clarion call that many are terrified to answer.

harmattan
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Posted by kelvin carl
2008-09-09 07:56:29
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I also, am obsessed with this idea. That in and of a willingness to do and be good to each other, the world could be saved.

It is loud and clear but many are preoccupied or simply ignoring the call.

Well done.
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Posted by colemoriss
2008-09-10 20:03:15
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this was good!

it sounds like the moral to Batman: dark knight movie, and that was a realy great movie too! so, yeah, it was realy good and painfully true
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Posted by colemoriss
2008-09-10 20:03:18
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this was good!

it sounds like the moral to Batman: dark knight movie, and that was a realy great movie too! so, yeah, it was realy good and painfully true
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Posted by colemoriss
2008-09-10 20:03:20
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this was good!

it sounds like the moral to Batman: dark knight movie, and that was a realy great movie too! so, yeah, it was realy good and painfully true
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Posted by colemoriss
2008-09-10 20:03:30
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this was good!

it sounds like the moral to Batman: dark knight movie, and that was a realy great movie too! so, yeah, it was realy good and painfully true
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Posted by Sylviap
2008-09-11 11:30:22
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So true.

I really like this topic. It's the topic of today by many people around the world, and especially people in the United States. We've come so far, reached such high powers, but we crush the little guys to accomplish this and now people want a change. We want to be good. This was beautiful. Thank you.
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