Will We Meet Again?

Can we find a better place

Can anything be saved from the disgrace

I have felt the darkness coming down

It turns all our smiles into frowns

Taking in this air I breathe

I start to choke and I can feel the bleed

All my flaws, I can't make them disappear

I kill the ghosts, but in time they will reappear

A virus, it's eating everything from inside

My flesh is rotting and soon will come the flies

And death appears from above, it is in sight

The sky moves over us, bringing its bright light

A few minutes pass, everything gets erased

I can hear judgement call, wiping away the misplaced

On the other side will we meet again, I pray with much hope

I never forgot the day you left me, hanging yourself with that rope

Keyword: Will Me Meet Again?

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Posted by b.k. 2008-08-26 18:55:00 .... what happened to the glimpse of hope that we saw a couple poems back? nonetheless it's really good, the third stanza was my favorite and for some reasong it really stuck out + Report this comment
Posted by Zombie Punk 2008-08-26 21:44:23 Will We Meet Again? Artwork at its best. Top notch Poetry. Sorry I don't have a longer review, but your verse left me speachless. + Report this comment
Posted by philneale1952 2008-08-27 05:01:32 Good Now THIS is poetry that I can relate to. It has meaning which is transmitted clearly, rhythm and goodness me......ir rhymes. Not a pop at you because this is a good piece. I just wish others would adopt the style. Phil + Report this comment
Posted by harmattan 2008-08-27 05:21:51 don't know where, don't now when Very dark, but accessible. Readable and poignant with a kick at the end. But the Dutch Uncle in me still wishes you could get out more and meet some nice people. Kind regards Harmattan + Report this comment
Posted by lemon 2008-08-27 13:50:11 .... wow. very intense. I am also wondering what happened to that glimmer of hope we saw not that long ago. The girls you know are dorks if they dont stick around... thats my opinion anyway + Report this comment
Posted by resistanceisfreedom 2008-08-27 17:49:17 .... dorks???? no, they were just drug infested whores. + Report this comment
Posted by lemon 2008-08-27 19:10:14 .... lol...ok. i'm glad you cleared that up for me haha + Report this comment
Posted by Eternal_Bliss440 2008-08-28 14:50:12 .... Wow! I really like the imagery you have here and how the first and last line is about hope. You've got a real intense feeling here and I love it. Amazing job + Report this comment
Posted by Eternal_Bliss440 2008-08-28 14:51:41 .... Never mind about the first and last line about hope. I misread those lines I think + Report this comment
Posted by Terry Collett 2008-09-07 14:56:48 .... I am becoming use to your style and subject matter. This has the things that draw you to write, the factors that make you want to create. Darkness,and sadness are here, thoughts, feelings. I enjoyed it; if enjoyed is the right word here as much as one can watching another's pain and sadness + Report this comment

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