As long as you're beside me

Blood courses through my veins

As long as you're my shadow

Life's light finds its way.

As long as you're my sense

I do not follow, blind

As long as you love me

I never leave my heart behind.

As long as you are near me

I cannot walk alone

As long as you are living

I will follow the road home.

Keyword: the road home beside me long

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Posted by harmattan 2008-08-22 17:06:26 Road Home A very simple uncomplicated love poem can be the hardest work in the world. Just a little bit twee, but a damn good stab anyway. Kind regards Harmattan + Report this comment
Posted by Behind_the_Mask 2008-08-22 17:27:24 WHO ARE YOU¿ I’d like to know who you are, A, is not enough perhaps your chaabuk, I don’t know seeing as you just joined the site. + Report this comment
Posted by lemon 2008-08-22 18:20:45 .... I liked it. it was a good love poem. I'd be shocked if this were another chaabuk poem because she couldnt possibly write something this good. =] + Report this comment
Posted by Tarhead Mugwump 2008-08-22 22:58:36 the road home the poem was a nice sweet ride down the road and an easy read. as i read it, i was looking for the big bang - you know, that line with a huge impact... good writing regardless! write on! + Report this comment
Posted by resistanceisfreedom 2008-08-23 16:54:27 .... very short but still got its point across anyway....when you have someone to love how could you possibly hurt.....that's what i think anyway. but very good poem. + Report this comment
Posted by Amatayo 2008-08-25 22:08:15 .... If this was made by a girl will you marry me. and if it is a guy then this poem was not that great. yeah + Report this comment

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