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Written by mick beville   
Wednesday, 20 August 2008

 

 

Dad Love

 

‘Dad love..!' That's what I called you when I sat on your knee and wanted to share your dinner. I don't know why but eating from your plate always seemed better than mine. Or it would be ‘dad love' our Sylvia and Pauline are hitting me, they weren't, I used to tell lots of lies in those younger days, and they must have worked because you spoilt me. To me you were my mister wonderful. I remember going rabbiting with you once cos I was afraid you'd get lost and wouldn't come home. 

Later when I was a young teenager you would worry about me trailing all over the country with my autograph book. You didn't know the half of it. Friends would cover for me while I slept on the pavement waiting for Beatles tickets. I gave you a lot of worries and you didn't know what to make of me as I would tell you lie after lie and charm you with ‘dad love'.

I know you were glad when I met Mick and settled down. But then I gave you one more heartache when I came to live in Australia. But when you came over on holiday with mum, you knew we'd done the right thing.

Anyway dad I'm going to miss our Thursday night phone calls and I want you to know that I love you with all my heart.

Good bye ‘Dad love'

Anne

PS

When I was four you took me up the Epolite to watch a storm cos I was afraid of lightning. I stood with you in the rain and held your hand while you explained what lightening was all about, and from that moment I was never afraid again. And when you came to Australia to visit me there was the best lightening storm I'd ever seen and we just sat and relived that special moment.I have so many good memories of us together that I will never forget you my ‘dad love.'

 



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Comments (6)
Posted by philneale1952
2008-08-20 03:58:15
Sad

Poignant letter to a father now lost forever?

If so, it's the kind of thing I felt when we lost close relatives, and the ache never really goes away.

Thanks

Phil
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Posted by sTiCkFiGuRe
2008-08-20 09:09:57
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ok,,so is the dad dead or is she gonna kill herself,,,WHY is this goodbye?
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Posted by harmattan
2008-08-20 13:46:22
Dad love

Needs a couple more lines of content just to avoid the silly comments like the previous here.

Whether by death or distance Anne is missing her dad, and that is conveyed extremely well.

Kind regards

harmattan
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Posted by lemon
2008-08-20 15:59:56
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This was cute.. but I'm with the Stick here.. why is this a goodbye letter?

One other thing... PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE go back and spell out 'because' instead of just having 'Cos'.. its horrible and offensive lol. =]
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Posted by chaabuk
2008-08-21 00:22:19
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This is superb. This is a charming piece of writing that I have read in recent times. One must always strive to strike a chord in a reader’s heart. You have achieved it in great measure. Good job. Keep it up. ;-)
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Posted by Ruby Whispers
2008-11-03 20:29:37
Liked This

I related well to this story. My father is gone and I have some very special memories of learning from him when I was a small child. Still afraid of lightening though. ;)

J
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