A Ticket to Tewkesbury

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One Hot Day


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Written by A M Lawrence   
Sunday, 17 August 2008

The heat was unbearable, the suns rays were beating down on the concrete, it's effects draining out every once of energy she had left. As if it weren't hot enough while at work, she had to come home to finish a few last project before Friday. Which happened to be only two days away.

A cold shower gave her the energy to come outside to get these projects started. If the sun would hide behind the set of trees to the west of the house she could start up the lawn mower she got running just an hour earlier.

But it was too hot.

Walking over to the water hose she turned the knob on and tipped her head upside down. When the water ran to cold she soaked her entire head. The cold water felt wonderful, already cooling her down by a few degrees. Flipping her head back upright the water dripping from her hair ran down over her shoulders, down her tank top making it almost to her shorts before it felt like it evaporated. The heat from her body warmed the water before it made it to her panties. Either way she wanted a complete cool down.

Raising the hose to the top of her head Jessica let the water run down her body, very cold and absolutely heavenly.

 

 

Travis hoped she would be home today. He was taking a chance and wanting to see her. Since he was passing through the area, it was worth the shot to find her at home. Maybe he could talk her into going to have a beer or something. Anything, he didn't care what. Just as long as he could visit with her.

Was he hooked on her or doomed? She was a fantastic lady, one he couldn't take his mind off of. She was arousing, intoxicating, completely mind blowing. And that was not a feeling he could ever pin point on a woman he shared company with. In fact, everything about her was only a fantasy to him before now.

Pulling into the rounded drive her jeep sat at the front of the house. His luck had changed today, finally something went right for a change. Knocking on the front door there was no answer, the curtains and windows were open and with the wide space open in the house it didn't look as if she were inside. Seeing the back slide door open, Travis caught a glimpse of movement through them. She was out back, so he would walk around to greet her. Stepping off the front porch, Travis followed the pathway around back, stopping at the corner to locate her whereabouts exactly.

If he didn't think she was absolutely gorgeous already and wanted her with the very pit of his core, watching her soak herself down with the garden hose would have made him believe he was a sixteen year old again waking from an arousing dream. She had just raised the hose over her head and closed her eyes. The water poured down her body, not cooling him off in the least.

She wore a tight pair of cut off jean shorts worn out over time, a white tank top and he was sure there was not a bra to cradle her breast at this time. Her nipples puckered, from the cold, protruding violently from the material, that was too thin to hide their secrets he knew would make her moan.

Her long brown hair lay back, dripping wet, plastering itself to her back and shoulders. One of her hands ran through it, pushing a few loose strands back from her face. The water glistened from her tanned skin.

Travis hadn't realized he had started walking towards her as he starred, needs stirring. His jeans suddenly feeling tight, his loins aching.

His hands reached out to her waist, running them up to her breasts then to her jaw, he had to kiss her , touch her. Feel every ounce of her soft skin. He ran his hands up into her tank top and cradles her breast then moved the material to suckle.

Jessica arched her back leaning into him, knowing he could please her. Her first expierience with him was a moment of magic, she wondered if this time would be the same.



Copyright 2008 A M Lawrence
Keyword: One Hot Day
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Comments (5)
Posted by Tarhead Mugwump
2008-08-17 23:51:35
oops!

well, sure got suckered into this one. the romance genre, although from time to time i accidently write in it, is not my cup of tea.

so what on earth was i doing?

i'm not sure, but i liked it.

oh, yeah, almost forgot - *faints*

write on!
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Posted by philneale1952
2008-08-18 05:04:41
So

I got suckered as well.

Thought this was a 'first timer', but then you lay it on me with the last paragraph.

Going for a cold shower now........

Phil
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Posted by resistanceisfreedom
2008-08-18 18:31:19
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i have to give you five stars because of the excellent descriptive detail you gave. i had no problem imagining this. very good!
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Posted by lemon
2008-08-19 09:07:13
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although there were some spelling and grammatical errors here, the story still left an impact. You did a great job with your imagery and detail. I could see this in my head as if it happened in my field of view.

I'd just clean it up a bit, but leave the content alone =]
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Posted by wcromart03
2008-08-25 21:38:24
Now thats hot

Now thats hot. Okay I know thats Paris Hilton's line but that was a hot story. I loved the details in it. All in all great story.
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