Posted by Zombie Punk
2008-08-09 01:19:53
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This made me chuckle, but it's really good.
I think the title is perfect. Like a calling. "Hey, this is what I did, and this is what I'm going to do now."
Darn good writing.
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Posted by garyowen
2008-08-09 03:10:14
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Then there was nothing
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Posted by garyowen
2008-08-09 03:13:49
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Hey ! Sorry for the glib comment Eliot. I thought the poem was very witty and well written.
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Posted by lemon
2008-08-09 12:27:22
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it was interesting. It was like..ok reason can only explain so much so now i'll just make my own shit up about this or that. that was my take on it anyway. =]
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Posted by colemoriss
2008-08-10 18:29:10
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i liked it, especialy seeing the whole hey thing as actualy making since. how you know hey is so simple and anything can come after it. anything like i hate you or i love you or this isnt the right amount of change, etc.
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Posted by June Eclipsis
2008-08-10 18:37:22
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I definitely have to agree with Zombie Punk on this. It was very entertaining indeed are darn well written.
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Posted by Pilgrim
2008-09-13 16:55:30
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This was okay.
Is this all there is? So, what's next? Wait a second, there is no next. But I'm still thinking of the next thing to say. Oh well, I'm confused.
Good job.
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