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The distant door closed shut behind him with a click....

Project 30, Chapter 21


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Wednesday, 06 August 2008
 

Epilogue

Michelle walked into the room and stared at the big screens in front of her. She looked over at Max who was also staring at the same thing she was.

"It's working," she whispered. "It's really working!"

A smile spread across her face and she shouted, "I can't believe it's working!!!"

She grabbed Max and they did a bear hug dance thingy around the room.

A man we shall call Brown Bear walked in. He surveyed the festivities. "So, Allmine, the plan is going according to schedule?"

"Yes sir, no one even suspected a thing."

"Good," he said. "Why don't we bring in the others?"

Michelle went to get the others. 13, Lemon, Potter, Max, the Brown Bear and herself gathered in the room. Lemon was the only one who wasn't part of the original gang, but she fit in like she was, so they invited her in. All of them stood around looking at the screen. The pandemonium of the evening's events was being played out in front of them. They saw the bickering writers in the hall, still trying to work with Davidson on who killed the "Admin." The stabbing and killing of Allmine was just icing on the cake as far as they were all concerned.

Glad that I really wasn't out there or I would be dead," Michelle said to her companions. "Guess the androids we made were good enough to fool them all. Remarkable likeness of you my dear." She walked up to Potter and put her arms around her waist and her head on his shoulder."

 

"And that dress is fetching on you.  Heck, it would be more fetching off of you!" he told her as he pretended to grab her and bite her in the neck
           

"Oh barf," Max said.  "Can you two knock it off please?"

 

"So, Project 30 is the revolution we have been waiting for," Brown Bear began. "We now can rule the StoriesVille site with ourselves and let our androids do the dirty work. They can be in places and do things when we are otherwise occupied with this site."

And by now, you are all probably wondering why Allmine was stabbed right? One of the guys, Jason, was jealous since she wasn't paying him attention. He saw her gift from the Admin and knew that there was something going on there. Jason had his suspicions, but when he saw the gift, he knew. But Jason didn't kill the Admin.  But he did stab her.  He was tired of watching her flirt with others as she paid him no mind.  That and she wasn't real fond of his cats either.

So, who did kill the Admin?  Was it one of the members standing there staring at the atrocities of the evening?  They wanted him to be frightened enough by the evening's events to completely bend to their will. But was done was done. At least now, they had enough time to host this website.

13 looked around, he didn't have an android out there to represent him and was conspicuously absent from the party. But he knew that his talents lay behind the scene, making sure that the androids were functioning properly. And he had done a remarkable job and they all patted him on the back.

Lemon was paid to kill the Admin. After all, who would ever suspect a girl adding lemon juice to anything?  And her android performed like she was supposed to. Her only foible was that she put too much poison in the champagne. It was supposed to make him sick, not kill him. But considering that they left it in the hands of a robot, they all agreed that it was a good job.

 

As for Detective Davidson, he was nothing more than an android himself.  They just needed someone to make it look official, and someone to get the remaining members in an uproar.  Since robots are antisocial by nature, he made the perfect questioning cop.  But one thing was for sure, he wouldn't ever solve the case, it wasn't written in his programming.

So that leaves us with who paid Lemon to kill the Admin? It was the butler of course.  He couldn't have killed the Admin outright. That would have been too obvious, and way too cliché, especially amidst a group of story writers. So paying someone to do it seemed like the next best thing. Last question, who was the butler? They all looked to their left to the man standing there. The one man who kept the site together, the one man who had more influence over the writers and the Admin all put together, the one man who had been a mastermind to the whole project, the Brown Bear himself. Tarhead Mugwump.

 

The End



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Comments (13)
Posted by The 13th
2008-08-08 16:37:32
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i found it!!

Great work lads, this really is the icing on the cake.Brill EPILOGUE.

But one question stll remains.

It didn't say in the story but I think it's very important.

Did I get any action.lol
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Posted by allmine
2008-08-08 16:43:02
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Yeah, you and Lemon get it on when she puts on the French Maid outfit!
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Posted by lemon
2008-08-08 16:43:08
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lol thirteen.. unfortunately you had to watch your adroid get lucky instead of you HAHA. just kidding.

I loved the epilogue. it was perfect! Nicely done Allmine and Max! We need to do it again sometime :)
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Posted by Zombie Punk
2008-08-08 16:44:27
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Great job on the epilogue, Michelle. Really is a perfect ending.

An ending, though?

Nope, this tale is long but over.

Or is it?

Well you'll have to wait and see

muhahahahahaha!
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Posted by Kasi elaborated
2008-08-08 20:08:30
All cleared up now...

From a pawns point of veiw... Well written I should have seen the whole clique thing coming. It twas fun.
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Posted by ams
2008-08-08 20:38:24
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o wow there actaully were robots involved. maybe my character was not going crazy after all.

loved the whole story and the ending was cool how you put together bits and pieces of the stories. great twist with jason trying to kill michelle. i never would have guessed that.
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Posted by philneale1952
2008-08-11 04:43:02
Twisted

Talk about twists - thought I was the King of Twisted.

(Kneels and offers Twisted Crown up to Allimne).

Bugger.............!

Phil
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Posted by Behind_the_Mask
2008-08-18 20:34:44
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WOW!!!

I had no idea.

well then again i did. last couple of chapters i was like hmmm.

GREAT WORK EVERYONE!
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Posted by Dirkin
2008-08-22 00:56:56
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Well, that makes a bit more sense! I have to say this whole project was immensely fun to be a part of, I think we should be proud of this effort.
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Posted by Tarhead Mugwump
2008-08-30 00:13:36
um... i, uh... well, you see...

honestly folks, i didn't know i had it in me!

great ending! - i think... i'll just keep my final thoughts to myself until the whole murder thing blows over.

i thought the local coppers were paying a little too much attention to my old tuna boat as i drove up the road!

*puts on crown and heads for the door

write on!
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Posted by Tarhead Mugwump
2008-08-30 00:15:29
Project 30

You folks did a wonderful job gluing all of the writers together to produce this piece.

Tips crown to the two editors and the crowd at the table!

Write On!
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Posted by scooby
2008-09-21 12:13:38
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great job putting this together max and michelle. everyone who wrote a chapter also did great. i really enjoyed reading this and seeing what everybody could come up with.
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Posted by J Writes Again
2008-09-28 23:20:45
Brilliant Collaboration

I didn't know I had it in me. Tarhead... you deserve the crown with lines like that. I have gotten more pleasure from joining this site then I can even describe. And I write, so I am supposed to be able too describe. Chomping at the bit to be in all of your illustrious company. (Did I misspell something?...Don't tell Lemon!)

Fabulous all.

J
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