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Written by Brian W Callaghan   
Friday, 08 August 2008

Trickle down,

A breaking will makes an awful sound,

You can't trust your fate,

To the conscience of the not so great,

 

I watched the fire die,

In my father's eyes,

When they declared war on you,

It was ninteen hundred and eighty two,

 

Your ideas' worth, seems to me at best, faint,

But now in your death, theyve declared you a saint,

 

What you took from me,

Oh, what you took from me,

When you made your speech,

On national TV. 



Copyright 2008 Brian W Callaghan
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Comments (4)
Posted by chaabuk
2008-08-08 16:27:40
Unfair, unjust!

Seems like old times revisited. A world where injustice and unfairness roled. Once a sinner has been declared a saint! Oh! what a cruel, cruel world! Merci!
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Posted by lemon
2008-08-08 23:50:27
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This was good. I liked the flow of the poem, but you know something funny? the first time i read the second line i thought it said 'a breaking WIND makes an awful sound' o.0

it sounds better your way lol nice job =]
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Posted by Something Indecent
2008-08-12 15:44:03
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I really liked your first two lines and the final stanza. Love the overall bashing you gave leader actor.

An amusing and satisfactory read. Good work.
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Posted by Terry Collett
2008-10-01 13:49:17
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Isn't it always the way. I thought this a solid poem with a good theme holding firm at the center. It has a good lucidity and style and I enjoyed it.
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