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Written by Project 30   
Wednesday, 06 August 2008
 

Chapter 4 - Max Booth III (Zombie Punk)

 

FADE IN:

INT:
A rectangular cafeteria-type of table resides in the middle of a long, narrow room, where a teenager named Max sits with his arms crossed. Even though his eyes are squinted from the blinding, headache-causing fluorescent-bulb lights he can still make out the dark shape of the tall, muscular Washington D.C. Detective.

(Detective Davidson is storming back and forth with an angry expression determined to stay across his face.)

DAVIDSON:

So, any time you feel like talking, please feel free to do so. It's not like anybody died or anything.

MAX:
What do you want to know?  I don't know anything, I'm just a kid.

DAVIDSON:
Yeah, exactly!  What is a kid from Indiana doing all the way out in D.C. at two-thirty in the morning?

MAX:
You know, it's the strangest thing. I went to bed and woke up here. I must be sleepwalking, huh?

DAVIDSON:
Yeah, keep on with the jokes. Your parents are on their way so I don't think you're gonna be smiling soon.

MAX:
So?  Oh big whup, my parents are coming. I needed a ride home anyways, didn't I?

DAVIDSON:
(nostrils flaring, he grabs Max by the collar and gets right in his face)
Listen here, you snot-nosed little punk, somebody was murdered!  You know what that means?  He's dead, and he ain't ever coming back!  Now you better start spilling your guts or so help me God I'm gonna make sure you see some time behind bars!

(Max realizes Davidson is not bluffing, so he sighs and ...)

MAX:
Okay, I'll talk.. What do you want me to tell you?

DAVIDSON:
We'll start off with a simple question: what is this StoriesVille?

MAX:
A website for short stories. Shouldn't you know that already, though?  I mean, aren't you the Detective?

DAVIDSON:
(ignoring the second half of Max's reply)
Next question: why did you come to Washington D.C.?

MAX:
(leans in close to the detective and whispers ...)
Well, don't tell anyone but ... I have a plan to take out the President. So, I guess you've caught me. An assassin before the assassination. Good job, you should give yourself a pat on the back.

(Davidson snares at Max like a rabid dog.) 

MAX:
Jeez, can't ya take a joke, man?  Uptight much?  Fine, I was invited to the party, as if that answer wasn't obvious. What else?

DAVIDSON:
Why were you invited?

MAX:
Because I'm a writer on StoriesVille.

DAVIDSON:
But why, out of all of the writers there were you one of the ones chosen?

MAX:
I dunno, guess because I've been a member for a long time and I've become fairly popular.

DAVIDSON:
What made you decide to come all the way out here?  You don't even know these people, except for online. They could have been anybody.

MAX:
I have my reasons ...

DAVIDSON:
And these are?

MAX:
I have a theory that the man who was murdered was, in fact, not the Administrator of StoriesVille.

DAVIDSON:
Then who was he?

MAX:
A pawn ...

DAVIDSON:
A pawn?  A pawn for what?

MAX:
For a man of greater power.

DAVIDSON:

And who is this man again?

MAX:
Well,  most know him as Stephen King--

DAVIDSON:
Stephen King?  What did I tell you about the jokes, Damnit!?  This is not a laughing matter!

MAX:
I'm not joking, Detective.

DAVIDSON:
Okay, so pleeeaase tell me; why would Stephen King be running an underground writing website?

MAX:
Isn't it obvious?  He's written over sixty novels, man. The dude is out of fresh material. You know that new one, ‘Cell'?  Well, I wrote that. The bastard stole my short story and turned it into a book.

DAVIDSON:
Alright, say if all of this is true; why would he invite you out to D.C. and get you all together?

MAX:
He wants us dead. He doesn't want anybody catching on to how he ‘thought' of his recent novels ideas.
   
DAVIDSON:
And you have proof?  Doubt it.

MAX:
I have what was in my Gift.

DAVIDSON:
And that was?

MAX:
A suicide note, and someone forged my signature at the bottom.

DAVIDSON:
Bullshit.

MAX:
It's at the mansion. Check it out for yourself. I think he was trying to poison us all with the wine. Just like the supposed ‘Admin'.

DAVIDSON:
You're insane.

MAX:
(leans in closer)
Am I?

DAVIDSON:
Yeah, you are.

MAX:
Well, I guess we'll have to agree to disagree.

DAVIDSON:
I'm done with you. Your parents will be here in an hour. I hope they beat your ass.

(Davidson walks toward the door and  ...)

MAX:
(shouts)
You can't hide the truth, Detective!

DAVIDSON:
(shakes his head and whispers ...)
******* psycho.

FADE OUT



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Comments (12)
Posted by The 13th
2008-08-08 13:20:42
psycho

I love this one.Read it with a smirk all the way.Loved the cockiness, funny stuff.

Great story and I think the script lay-out worked in your favour.
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Posted by onyxdragon
2008-08-08 13:32:33
Oh, my...

You wrote in script form? Lucky, I think I'm better writing in script form. I liked. Good job. Had to drag Stephen King into, too, I see. Oh, my... ironic.
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Posted by lemon
2008-08-08 15:19:34
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Lol yours was funny Max. Loved all your smartass remarks. =]
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Posted by ams
2008-08-08 17:56:04
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haha this was great. i liked the format, it worked well with this. i also loved the remarks, i definately could see this happening.
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Posted by Kasi elaborated
2008-08-08 19:20:32
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Haha Stephen King, that makes complete sense.. I too liked the format! Different and easy to follow.
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Posted by philneale1952
2008-08-11 01:11:28
Solid

Absolutely brilliant Max, wish I'd thought of this strand.

Straight out of some detective series and immensely well controlled dialogue.

Top notch.

Phil
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Posted by Dirkin
2008-08-11 08:38:54
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hah i bet detective davidson will be pulling his hair out by the time this story is over! poor guy. its interesting to see such different takes on the subject
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Posted by Behind_the_Mask
2008-08-18 15:59:04
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Great.

No other words can explain your writing style.
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Posted by Ashutosh
2008-08-19 08:37:22
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Great piece, Max. Funny, and well written.

I enjoyed reading it. Script format was a good idea.
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Posted by Tarhead Mugwump
2008-08-21 03:16:10
30/4

you can call my psychic,or you can call me psycho, heck - you can call me fred if ya want...

but that had to be max playing the part of max.

i would have expected nothing other than a broke jaw detective in this chapter.

very entertaining!

write on!
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Posted by scooby
2008-09-19 13:34:14
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this was so funny

i love how you portrayed yourself. and i love how you did it in script form and only focused on the interview instead of another view of the murder. but don't get me wrong i do love the different view points this was just a nice change.
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Posted by J Writes Again
2008-09-28 16:20:21
Cheeky teenager...

If you don't follow through with a writing career ... I will personally hunt you down and kick your wise ass, incredibly talented butt! Ok, so butts literally can't be talented...but you get my drift mister.

J
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