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Primal Need, Chapter 1

Primal Need - Chapter 1 Blood. The metallic...

SHE LOVED RANDAL


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Written by Terry Collett   
Thursday, 07 August 2008
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She had loved Randal
Until it hurt, loved
Him black night and dim
Day in a crazy
Kind of way, the kind
That gets deep beneath

The soft and tender
Skin and bites and gnaws,
That kills off hunger,
Sleep and other things
Less worthy or so
Her all too wounded

Heart and mind decide.
She loved him in a
Way that drove her mad,
And made her want to
Possess him and his
Soul all the time, each

Passing moment of
Her life, wanted him
To love her too, make
Her his loving wife.
But Randal never
Said he loved her, or

Showed the madness in
His life that she had
Shown or searched her out
In ways that she had
Him. His was a cold
And different kind of

Love, if love it was,
The, let's-go-to-bed
And-rock-the-damned-world,
Kind of thing, or kiss
And copulating
Until dawn genre

Of love, far from that
Kind that she had sought
In her darkly hours
And long sleepless nights.
She had loved Randal
Until the day he

Went away with some
Other dame with cool
Goodbyes and sly smiles
And a thousand lies.



Copyright 2008 Terry Collett
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Comments (7)
Posted by philneale1952
2008-08-07 03:55:24
Trying

Trying extremely hard to understand poetry on this site, and yours is one of the few styles that I can get to grips with.

I've been down this road, so maybe that helped the process.

Will read more now that you're back, may not understand, but will try.

Phil
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Posted by harmattan
2008-08-07 05:31:10
So

You bedded the Polish girl!

You devil you.

Just a dirty old man in a mac?

I jest.

This is a dark, brooding, paiful and very deep manifestation of unrequited and dissapointed love.

It is superb.

We have all done it, or had it done to us. But rarely is it said out loud like this, in plain words.

Nothing obscure or clever here.

Just facts. Feelings are facts.

You are a true wordsmith.

And I am not a gusher.

Kind regards

Harmattan
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Posted by garyowen
2008-08-08 03:33:58
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Your style is refreshing terry.This poem was simple and yet with a darkness lurking - as previous said - in the depths of feeling. I get pleasure from your posts.
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Posted by allmine
2008-08-08 11:26:58
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I am so glad that you are coming back. I love your writing, it speaks to me. I feel like you are talking to me and touching on things in my mind and heart that no one else understands....can't wait for more!
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Posted by Zombie Punk
2008-08-08 14:14:45
She Loved Randal

Whoa, got a little 'damn' in ya, eh?

This is really good, all of your Poems are awesome. Really great stuff.

You, sir, are truley a Poet

but do you know it?
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Posted by chaabuk
2008-08-12 19:00:57
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There is so much intensity of emotion here that it tears the heart. Love on one plane is life giver but on the other can take the breath away. You portray these emotions very well.
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Posted by Pilgrim
2008-09-04 13:58:11
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This is similar in format to the one I just read by you. This one flowed better, to me. The third line through me off a bit, him black night, I don't know, that didn't sound right.
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