Primal Need, Chapter 1

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Passion


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Written by Michelle Huff   
Tuesday, 05 August 2008

 

            She looked at herself in the mirror for the 1000th time.  She had changed outfits like 4 times before deciding on what she was wearing.  It was her first time to meet him and she wanted everything to be perfect.  She looked at her hair and make-up one more time before deciding that she looked fine.  She walked back out into the hallway in her office.  She nervously looked at the clock in anticipation.  He should be here any minute.  She heard the chimes on the front door; he was here.

            She smoothed down her skirt and got up to meet him.  She took a deep breath in order to calm her nerves.  She was nervous and excited all at the same time.  They weren't strangers, at least not in the emotional sense.  They had been talking for months, both online and on the phone.  She knew every intimate detail about him and he knew every intimate detail about her.  They had clicked and decided that they should finally meet.

            Then she saw him.  He had to be the most magnificent creature that she had ever seen.  She had seen pictures but they did no justice to the man standing before her.  Tall, muscular, with sandy brown hair and the most gorgeous hazel eyes.  He smiled at her and her heart did a flip- flop and she hoped that her physical appearance didn't make him run.

            He had been dying to meet her.  He wanted to meet her since the first day that they talked.  But he knew that she would run if he tried to push her too fast.  He loved talking to her, listening to her thoughts and ideas.  She was so smart, so witty, so sweet.  She had the kind of emotions that made you want to spank her and hold her tight all in the same breath.  Even when she was overly emotional, he wanted to get mad, but then he wanted to kiss her.  Being physically apart had been so hard, but he knew that she was worth the wait.

            He could barely contain his excitement that morning at the prospect of meeting her.  He tried not to speed as he drove the distance to see her.  He could hardly wait.  He managed to make it all in one piece and he took a deep breath as he got out of his truck at her office.  He needed to calm down his thumping heart.  The door chime tinkled as he walked in.  Then there she was.  She was so beautiful.  She radiated a soft glow about her as if the sun was a spotlight just for her.

            "Hi," she said shyly as she looked at him from under her lashes.  Her deep brown eyes and her long dark lashes were in such contrast with her pale white skin.

            "Hi," he said back as he looked at her in awe.

            He wanted to touch her.  He knew that it was right.  His hand reached out and stroked her cheek.  He had never felt anything so soft before as if her skin were made of rose petals.  He slid his hand under her chin and he lifted her gaze up to his.  Their eyes met and he could see the passion burning inside her.  He took her into his arms and gave her a kiss.

            She had wanted this so bad.  Wanted to feel the strength of his arms around her, holding her tight as his mouth claimed hers.  She responded too.  Their kisses became deeper and deeper, his fingers intertwined in her hair.  She felt a tingling rush that she had not felt in a long time; it was the rush of sexual anticipation.

            He knew that he needed to stop before they went too far, but he couldn't help himself.  They fit so right together, her kisses so sweet.  He loved the little noises that she made kissing him back.  He was sure that she would be mortified if she knew, but it endeared her to him all the more.  He couldn't take much more.  His loins were on fire and he wanted her bad.

            Surprisingly she broke contact first.  She smiled deviously at him and locked the front door.  She led him down the hall into another room.  He followed her.  She couldn't believe that she was being this carefree, but she couldn't concentrate on anything else.  Once they reached the confines of the room, she wrapped her arms around him again and they began to kiss some more.  His hand began to roam her body as he wanted feel her all over.  Pressed up tight against him, she could feel his hardness.

            She unbuttoned his pants and reached for him, stroking his large manhood in her small hands.  She pushed him back into the chair, his rigid penis straight up in the air.  She lifted her skirts some as she straddled him and settled down on him.  Instantaneous fire consumed her body and she moaned in his arms.  He felt so good nestled deep inside her.

            He was taken aback at how forward she was.  He loved it and let her take the lead.  As she sank down on him, her warm wetness did him in.  He knew that this was they both needed.  She began to squirm on him and began to ride him.  He watched her face in all its beauty as she orgasmed for him.  He felt the hotness she created drip down his shaft.  He couldn't take much more and he too let his load go inside of her.

            They sat there for a few more minutes, neither of them wanting to move or let go.  She looked down at him again with shyness on her face. 

"I knew that we wouldn't be able to do or say anything else until we had done that," she said.

He knew that she was right.  "Next time, we take more time to explore," he told her, trying to act stern.  "But this proves one thing," he continued, "I love you MLH.  From the moment we first talked to this moment where we fit so perfect together."

She looked at him, "I love you too JDH.  We were meant to be."   



Copyright 2008 Michelle Huff
Keyword: Passion
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Comments (25)
Posted by philneale1952
2008-08-05 15:30:42
Welllllllllllllllllllll

Are you trying to tell us something?

This was so carefully built up that it beggars belief if there isn't something personal in amongst it.

Lots of detail, intricately woven into the storyline and quickly coming to a climax (no pun intended).

Hmmmmmmmmm

10/10 for effort and skill.

Phil
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Posted by The 13th
2008-08-05 15:50:15
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Well Allmine it's been a while. A simple story but written so well.And it read smoothly.

Wished you went more into the sexy bits, lol

As always, spot on.
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Posted by allmine
2008-08-05 15:58:57
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You would...I was trying to show that you could have a naughty story on here without being vulgar. Porn can be artistic...or it can be smut..
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Posted by Tarhead Mugwump
2008-08-05 16:05:58
hmm...

*faints*

with a smile...

write on!
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Posted by Helpless
2008-08-05 19:43:58
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Wow, that was something, I was starting to sweat.

Seriously....good job. I think it gave an accurate description of what internet relationship must be like when people first meet, all the build up.

Great story.
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Posted by resistanceisfreedom
2008-08-05 19:54:35
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it was written well....but i felt like this story was just boring. there wasn't anything i read in here that i haven't read before.
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Posted by lemon
2008-08-05 20:24:11
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Well well Michelle. The porn has come forth haha. This was very well written. Tasteful. it wasn't, like you said earlier, smut. I agree with you that there IS a difference.
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Posted by r.e.potter
2008-08-05 21:06:56
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Wow, this was erotic. I think I will sign off for the night while this is fresh in my mind. Might be a wild night at the potter household.

FYI-Im not a young man anymore, not sure I can take many of these.

It was a well hung,,I mean well told story of erotica
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Posted by
2008-08-07 23:32:10
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i can't deny that it is very well written but...

you know,there's not any thing new about it!

it's just an erotic well written story,i think you are a good writer,keep it up!
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Posted by Brian W Callaghan
2008-08-08 15:00:47
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Wow. that was pretty graphic. i enjoyed it though. i must admit that it aroused me. The attetion to detail was good, but i would like there to have been more of a plot in there before the sex.
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Posted by Kasi Elaborated
2008-08-09 20:15:51
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Man, whatever happened to dinner and a movie... Very stimulating to say the least.
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Posted by Ashutosh
2008-08-10 09:12:44
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I really liked the way it started. It seemed very well-written and honest in depiction.

Then as I read on, it seemed very predictable, which is not wrong, but more so very common. It began with style and ended ina very ordinary sort of way.

Well-written though.
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Posted by jagblane
2008-08-10 15:34:18
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Some people think this is well written but I would say different. I think you need to try to get away from sounding to much like you are just talking to a friend. That way you would avoid mistakes like "She had changed outfits like 4 times" The like makes it sound as if she could of tried on more or less than 4 outfits. As I'm sure you have worked out(by the amount of men going phowwar that turned me on) it does read a bit like a bad story in a porn mag! You can do better I'm sure. Or if you do want it to sound that way you should have pout more porn in it!(not that I would know anything about bad stories in porn mags!)
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Posted by Zombie Punk
2008-08-11 15:47:03
Passion

I think this story belongs in April Rain: An Erotic Anthology of Sexual Encounters

hahaha

This was definitly a different type of read then I'm used to, but nonetheless it was written extremley well and had some good descriptions. There was some real passion in this, so that made the title perfectly chosen. I thought it opened up really great with the looking in the mirror for the thousanth time.

The last three paragraphs you forgot to indent--just pointing that out to ya.

Keep well,

Max
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Posted by allmine
2008-08-11 15:49:19
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Hell you're right...just don't tell Lemon! :)
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