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Written by Nathan Weaver   
Monday, 04 August 2008

This is the plot.  This is where the story goes.  It could have only so many avenues.  There’s a hero, there’s a villain and a dame—there’s always a dame.  She can be all good or a femme fatale.  Or, you could have a heroine and villain.  Or, you could have an anti-hero.  Or, you could have a character study where the protagonists and antagonists are not so easily defined.  In this case, who is pro and anti is determined by the interpretation and ethics of the reader.

 

If there was a story it should’ve started in the previous chapter, but it didn’t.  This chapter should be progressing what started previously, continuing the reader through the rising action towards the climax and then eventually into the resolution.  Yes, this should be continuing what has already been established, but as of yet nothing has been established.

 

There are no given circumstances, other than that you are an impotent hussy and so on.  But, how do these details further our progression?  Hard to say.  Often times, we could have started previously with an event from the villain or villains.  And now, we could be meeting our hero and beginning to realize his connection to the villains in the previous matters.  However, we did not have that, did we?

 

Perhaps, we should go back and start our story again.  Or, perhaps we could decide there really is no story.  Most true stories don’t actually tell like stories.  They’re random and unpredictable.  That’s real life, but you know all about that, don’t you?  For instance, since this is real life, I dare you to predict my occupation.  I bet you can’t.  I’ll give you three seconds.

 

Three.

 

Two.

 

One.

 

I don’t have a job. 

 

Some might argue it was a trick question, but undeniably it was not predictable.  If you did get it right, then perhaps I’m wrong about all this.  Maybe this is a story and maybe this isn’t real.  In which case, we would need to begin to establish some characters.  Some pros and antis and conflicts.  Gotta have conflicts.  Stories without conflicts are barely stories at all.  Though, most of real life can be gotten through without conflicts or at least life threatening ones—until you’re dead, anyway.  Life doesn’t have to be so definitive.

 

As I ponder my life, I can think of no story.  There is no conflict.  No villains, few dames.  No dames that stick around, that’s for sure—not like in most stories.  Neither femmes nor lovers—or both.  No heroes, no main characters.  The scenery, sets and faces are constantly changing.  Like working in fast food, there are no main characters because the turn over is ludicrously high.  And this is mine.  My life.  It has had a large turn over, but no story or conflicts to speak of.  Nothing definitive.

 

No, this must be real life.  It cannot be a story.



Copyright 2008 Nathan Weaver
Keyword: You as I see It
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Comments (5)
Posted by chaabuk
2008-08-04 19:45:43
Fantabulous

This is fantabulous. I was expecting a story but find short of nothing. But kinda it is enjoyable. For I like Nonsense Verse under which Limericks come. That is highly enjoyable. I guess, this is one. Keep writing.
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Posted by Tarhead Mugwump
2008-08-04 20:36:40
backwards

a great example of the story about nothing...

i liked the "guess my job" part - all in all a very enjoyable unstory you wrote here. unwrite a little more...

(un)write on!
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Posted by philneale1952
2008-08-08 07:45:14
....

Pain in the neck here.

I'm a little lost. Got a map?

Phil
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Posted by onyxdragon
2008-08-08 08:23:38
Map

No map, yet. I would say it's more of an essay, than story at this point. The idea is that the character is expressing himself and in the end, perhaps a story will have been told. I kind of make it up as I go and am constantly looking for ways to confuse the method. More than anything it started as an homage or tip of the hat to Chuck Palahniuk (author of "Fight Club").

Perhaps we could call it Link's Madlibs. Eventually, there will be some "revelation" to it all, but I'm not sure yet what that is. I'm trying not to think too much about it, so it remains fresh and distorted.
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Posted by Halios
2008-11-18 16:01:54
Strange, but in a good way

A nice followup from the previous chapter. Smooth, easy to read flow. Very creative to have a story about nothing, but yet about everything. It's pretty trippy.
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