Posted by philneale1952
2008-08-04 04:34:06
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Lovely piece of sensitiveness.
Carefully worked stanzas which flow very gracefully.
Phil
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Posted by Zombie Punk
2008-08-04 12:03:07
WOW!!!
Well, I just absolutley loved this one! Each line seemed carefully planned out and they worked perfectly. Usually in a Poem you have to stop for a second to reread something but in this one I just couldn't, it was as if i was tumbling down a poetic mountain and i couldn't hold on to anything. Great Poem, 'Anna!
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Posted by Tarhead Mugwump
2008-08-04 20:18:17
hmm...
max said, "tumbling down a poetic mountain" - and for some reason i never expected to read that in a max comment. i apologize for that max.
and my comment is: what max said.
wonderful sara.
write on!
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Posted by Terry Collett
2008-08-05 02:34:26
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As usual you have brought us a very vivid poem, utilizing the right words to being the images you wanted to convey. there is your honesty, the sense of colour in the words chosen, the inner beat,that slightly dark imagery, feelings, sensations. You are in my book a very talented poet and ought to be read far more widely.
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Posted by onyxdragon
2008-08-06 11:54:33
Once again
Excellent execution of flow and words. You are very poetic and achieve vivid images. Keep up the fantastic work. I shall continue to read on.
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Posted by Amatayo
2008-08-06 22:32:40
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ooooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhh this was a nice poem and it went well. The only question did you come up with the title before or after you wrote the poem.
just want to know.
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Posted by garyowen
2008-08-09 05:18:31
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This poem bruised my heart. Your aticulation can only be discribed poetic
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