She noticed that the sky was getting blue and the clouds were getting blurry.She tried to take a picture of it but it seems like there's no perfect angle. She looked at the grounds and she was amazed with what she saw. She saw her friend's reflection in the water smiling at her. So she turned around and looked at him. She touched his face and hugged him tight. He hugged her too. She knew all this time that he got this special feelings for her but he just couldn't say it. He looked at her in the eye and asked her about what their going to be after a week. She didn't answer his question instead she looked at the grounds and search for some answers. She knows his special but she couldn't give him a satisfactory answer though deep inside the word "US" is actually beeping. He asked her again but she said they shouldn't ruin the day. The weather was great and it's windy. He just nodded and kissed her in the forehead. She so love the feeling. It's like having butterflies in the stomach.

They sat down for a while. She was thinking maybe this was the right time to tell him how she feels. He was thinking maybe this was the right time to give up. She leaned on his shoulder then he closed his eyes. He looked at her and gazed at her for awhile. She smile at him thinking how pretty he was. He smile and said he's not willing to wait . She was shocked. She looked at him confusingly. He bow down his head and closed his eyes. She hugged him while saying this...

"I thought I was right...I thought you're going to be mine...but it seems like can't wait and I really can't afford to force you...you can leave now..."

He left her and walk away.

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For those people who posted their comments before I finished the story, I thank you.

You inspired me a lot. I was really drunk when I wrote the first six lines. I don't knnow what to write at that time. I was just thinking about the nice beach and the nice weather. I can't think of anything. I just added the sorta love story to make it a story. It's quite boring. I think so.

Keyword: UNFINISHED BUSINESS

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Posted by Helpless 2008-08-03 05:23:27 .... I am a little confused. I liked the imagery, but I have to admit, I have no idea what is going on with this. Is this a trip on a bad drug? Dumb question maybe. Like I said, nice imagery + Report this comment
Posted by philneale1952 2008-08-03 08:51:52 ???????????? I don't know about 'a little confused', I'm completely bamboozled. Is this a very short story of some kind? Have I missed something? Is it poetry in blank verse? Just what is the message that you are trying to put across? Phil + Report this comment
Posted by Zombie Punk 2008-08-03 09:00:15 .... clever title you cheeky bugger but i thought this "story" was just plain stupid and a waste of space. really, what was the point of this? + Report this comment
Posted by lemon 2008-08-03 13:29:21 .... um. what? I think you copied and pasted the wrong thing into the submit new short STORY form. I'm not sure what you are trying to do here, but its.. confusing to say the least.. the whole posting an unfinished story and giving it a 'unfinished business' must be too artsy fartsy for me to grasp. + Report this comment
Posted by Hodders 2008-08-04 10:03:28 .... I get it, kind of, but I still don't seethe point of it. There's a lot of other writers who have put a lot more effort into their stories and for me this seems just a waste of space. + Report this comment
Posted by topsyturvywords 2008-08-07 16:58:16 REPOSTED I reposted the short story. It's literally short.LOL.I don't know if you will like it. Sorry for the first hanging lines when I posted this. I wasn't sober at that time.Thanks :) + Report this comment

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