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My Sweet Black Rose


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Written by August Blackwood   
Thursday, 31 July 2008
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A yell

From the dark East corner.

Unheard and ignored.

A cry for help from

Behind a facade of the bright.

Disappeared forever,

A blinding wall between us.

Melt away and

Leave us alone again.

I fear the air

Between us.

You are unknown to me.

Within me,

The walls broke like cold glass in heat.

I can't hear from you yet,

Far away in

Needless loneliness.

 

A heartache is a

Longing song without bliss.

 

I believe that

The blade lands in the deepest of our hearts.

The pain that surges through you

It leaks.

It shows, unconditionally,

Through mine, eternally,

Under the shattered midnight moon.

 

Pounding

Under layers of flesh,

Pain with each beat of

Blood.  

Pushed back through

Sewn wounds,

Throbbing.

Prevention accomplished,

Now the light won't meet

What is now sought dead.

 

Maple leaves

Dance in tiny

Tornados of absence.

 

Silence breaks through

By the cicada's cry

Of approaching death.

 

Winds pour from the

Skies

And the light comes,

Hiding all that was there.

 

A smile wondering

In the painful scorch.

Clapping hands of

Approval behind my back.

Laughing as I enter my

Home, leaving them behind to sing for the sun,

 

I, Crying in the darkened

Softness of my bed.

The comfort of the black

Caresses my sides,

Contorting to every curve and

Angle.

It is truthfulness, it is goodness,

It is beauty.

 

 

 

The happiness returns

As I enter

The place I belong.

The wounds open

And I shed my shell,

The heat evanished

Forever.

The fear of the light

And its evil grins,

Now forgotten.

 

"I am back."

"Welcome home."

"I love you...

My sweet Black Rose.

I'll love you til death."

 

 

 

Our embrace never ends.

 



Copyright 2008 August Blackwood
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Comments (9)
Posted by chaabuk
2008-07-31 15:56:53
Beauty

Love was never so beautifully expressed, where grief was dripping in the begging, a hopeful and happy ending paves way for love. I had read "my love is like a red red rose" but here the black rose has intensity. Beautiful.
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Posted by lemon
2008-07-31 17:40:17
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usually the longer poems tend to lose rhythm as it goes, but this one did not. I'll lose interest sometimes too, but this kept my attention the whole time. It was beautifully written =]
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Posted by Tarhead Mugwump
2008-07-31 20:54:28
i got

attached to the words:

tiny tornados of absence.

really enjoyed reading this one - i am also generally poem length challenged, but between the font and the words i rolled to the end.

write on!
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Posted by Terry Collett
2008-08-01 13:52:51
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I am back after a short break. Forgot how good the poetry can be here. This is good; enjoyed.
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Posted by Hodders
2008-08-01 15:34:50
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Brilliant! Probably one of the best poems I've read on here in all honesty. I loved it! Very deep and meaningful, well written, it seemed very personal. definitely one for my favourites I think! Brilliant job! Well done!
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Posted by resistanceisfreedom
2008-08-01 16:04:49
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and i believe this is one of the most beautiful things i have ever read. seriously, your talent is huge and you write amazing poetry.
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Posted by Sad Sara
2008-08-01 22:36:38
Whew!

Damn August...

Wow!

What an amazing verse, so beautiful and I loved the length and thought yer put into this one here.

I fear the air

Between us. -That such fab line, I love it.

You are unknown to me.

Within me,

The walls broke like cold glass in heat.

I can't hear from you yet,

Far away in

Needless loneliness.-Oh yes, I love needless loneliness, it sound so damn Poetically cool.

Aye, well done me girl, this was fantastic.

Keep well,

'Anna
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Posted by Vintage prose
2008-08-02 00:28:31
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This was a great poem, beautifully expressed, and visually stimulating.

I especially relished the lines...

Maple leaves

Dance in tiny

Tornados of absence.
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Posted by jagblane
2008-08-17 16:25:16
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Great pictures but unfortunalty to long. Maybe you should try to change the lay out a little so those of us with less average memory retention can keep the message in our heads. Sometime the art of the peom is to say little but mean alot. You certainly know how to "mean" alot but it's the spaces that make the reader think and therefore ultimatly engage with a piece. But don't let me discourage you from some fine writing.
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