Posted by Mokusa
2008-07-20 17:04:34
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Awesome poem! Very well written, good language and pace and everything. And you pulled it out of the norm with that last comment about the wine. I really liked it a lot!
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Posted by Zombie Punk
2008-07-20 22:14:50
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This flow was awesome.
The short lines lit the fuse of a really great Poem and it exploded at the end.
Really good job, 'Anna.
Keep well.
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Posted by garyowen
2008-07-21 02:05:27
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It seemes such a pity that the bottled moment is so prone to fading with the stars. to say your your poem was good would be selling it short. Intoxicating maybe?
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Posted by mickruston
2008-07-21 07:42:20
Our Mutual Wine
Combines two loves of my life, romance and wine - haha - Very nicely written - I liked it very much - like a fine 12 year old merlot! The ending is particularly apt - especially after sharing the wine! Very nice!
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Posted by resistanceisfreedom
2008-07-21 15:14:41
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yea, the ending really tied this together for me. thought it was good.
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Posted by Eliot Rosenstock
2008-07-22 01:17:19
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A liked the poem. While I enjoy big picture writing more, I have to say, for a poem focusing on the love and surrounding feelings about champagne, it kept me entertained.
Very poetic. The symbols of love capture are original. Thank you for not being cliche :)
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Posted by Something Indecent
2008-07-22 14:13:34
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I was scratching the dandruff out of my hair while reading your poem anna. There's just so much of it. I'm not much into romance but I think you had a smooth and fruity flow here. It seemed kind of sad but what do I know. My dead skin is covering the keyboard.
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Posted by philneale1952
2008-07-25 12:39:08
?????????????
How do you keep coming up with this extraordinary material?
I don't do poetry, but yours I could drown in.
Don't stop the flow (no pun intended)
Phil
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Posted by Tarhead Mugwump
2008-07-27 10:18:04
perhaps
even the virtual doors need a key.
hello sara, i really missed your verse. i'm reading my way backwards - you're like the energizer bunny!
write on!
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Posted by Terry Collett
2008-08-06 02:28:27
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Excellent poem. I would rather read one poem by you than a whole library of works by others lesser mortals.
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