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Written by rosa mae alamil   
Wednesday, 16 July 2008

 

Self:

"hey!"

 

Mirror:

"hey!"

 

Self:

"how's it going?"

 

Mirror:

"nah..not much really especially if you're stuck in this wall and hey I should ask you the same thing...how's it going?"

 

Self:

"nah not much really.,,same thing as yours...but I really had this very bad day...."

 

Mirror:

"you want to talk about it?"

 

Self:

"sure...you know there was this one day at work people are working and we have this internet relay chat but it doesn't really work as IRC...because there are limited features.."

 

Mirror:

"okay,,"


 

Self:

"one of my colleague ping me...it's actually a conference room...so if somebody wants to tell you something everybody in the conference will know...then she pings me and I wasn't able to respond because honestly I was sleeping in my work station..."

 

Mirror:

"so?.."

 

Self:

"hmmm...at first she was calling me by my real name then there was annother colleague who pings me too then I wasn't able to respond again...so they call me by my pet name.."

 

Mirror:

"what's your petname?"

 

Self:

"jungle book?"

 

Mirror:

"are you sure?why are they calling you jungle book?"


Self:

"it's because of my hair...actually they're referring to moogley...the main character on that movie..."


Mirror:

"oh yeah..I remember...that sucks! you don't look like him and besides you're a girl..so how do you feel about it?"


Self:

"sucks?...I don't know...sometimes I don't mind but most of the time it's annoying...you just don't want to talk to fake people sometimes..."

 

Mirror:

"so did you confront them about it?"

 

Self:

"nah..nevermind...if the pet name sucks I think they suck too..I'm not really into confronting people...you know me.."

 

Mirror:

"yeah you rather talk to me or put your senses on your blog...but hey this is not a blog right?"

 

Self:

"yeah this is not a blog...this is storiesville..."

 

Mirror:

"so why are you putting it here why not on auicidal notes?"

 

Self:

"I can't access my blog here...haha.."


Mirror:

"ahhh I see...so you're posting it now?"

 

Self:

"yeah it's actually posted already..."

 

***

I wonder how many people in the world used to be a laughing stuff at work but for all I know most of them are deep people who easily get wounded when somebody judge them about how they look. It's never fair for them. Being a laughing stuff is not really funny even if you say it's a joke. You're degrading somebody's character. You better check yoursefl first maybe your a better laughing stuff than the one that your laughing at. Fair isn't it?

 

 



Copyright 2008 rosa mae alamil
Keyword: dimension
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Comments (6)
Posted by Forsaken
2008-07-17 05:05:22
cool,

Is the narrator talking to himself in the mirror? Like a monologue? I liked how you kept it at a quick pace.
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Posted by CDeCarlo
2008-07-17 15:48:22
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I liked how its something weve all gone through, either at school or work, or even just on the streets. Weve all been judged and then had to go home and face ourselves in private. Good work.
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Posted by Something Indecent
2008-07-17 18:57:03
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What just happened here? I do love talking to myself. So that gets you points.
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Posted by topsyturvywords
2008-07-18 15:17:19
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yeah it's like a monologue.the character was just talking to herself about how bad she felt on that day...i'm glad you like it...
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Posted by Xena
2008-07-18 17:22:38
hmm

i liked the whole premace.. or whatever.. but at the end.. its like some random guy with kahkies and a dress shirt just walked out of nowhere and started to explain how we should act to one another.. you knwo what i mean. its a good message and all.. like.. i dont know if id call it judging but rather observing.. like a guy walks past me with a big nose.. i say hey that guys got a big nose.. maybe hes jewish.. i dont say.. wow look at that fatty fat nose.. he looks so stupid with that fat nose.. i bet hes stupid too! but fashion is a whole nother story.. like some people i can just see and the first thing that pops into my head is.. tool.. or.. hippy, wankster and so on.. and these are much more accurate then actual natual appearences.. know wha mean? cause like its pretty much them wanting you to think a certain way of them.. and so we, or I do. know wha mean? koolio
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Posted by topsyturvywords
2008-07-21 01:05:13
@XENA

yeah i guess what your trying to say..sometimes people are just too observant...and when they found something funny about that person they always come up with a funny humiliation...it make sense to me though...we don't know who that person is...so we don't have the right to judge...
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