Posted by Zombie Punk
2008-07-16 02:15:20
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First off let me say (or type) that the title is so cool sounding. Haunted Sorrow...
Now, this poem was just kickass sounding. Written with a creepy little tone to it. good stuff you have here.
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Posted by philneale1952
2008-07-16 05:36:25
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Hauntingly romantic, Byronic and Shellyan.
Nice piece.
Phil
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Posted by The 13th
2008-07-16 05:50:19
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Brilliant writing but with a creepy feel.
As always great work.
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Posted by June Eclipsis
2008-07-16 09:38:41
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I absolutely loved the topic. The title was awesome and the poem was wonderful in itself. Your language is gorgeous and that picture is pretty creepy in itself. Wonderfully done! Beautiful work.
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Posted by resistanceisfreedom
2008-07-16 21:51:13
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yes could definitely feel the creepy feeling in this. but i also felt like it was serene as well. but anyway, very good job Anna!!
Sorrowful One, definitely approves of this one. haha.
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Posted by SageSyren
2008-07-17 09:59:46
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When reading this I could picture a young girl sitting on a iron framed bed with a simple white quilt. Her hard in a long braid down across one shoulder. Her hands folded in her lap. She is neither pleading nor crying, but just imploring.
I loved this. Brillantly written with a nice flow or words.
Bravo
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Posted by colemoriss
2008-07-17 12:44:03
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this was a very good poem. its like something you could use as like a quote for the ghost hunters series, or the physic kids show. it is kinda creepy, but understood. i used to hear my dead dog's nails clicking on the floors, and she used to crawl in my bed at night, as a ghost, but she wasnt there to hurt anyone.
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Posted by Something Indecent
2008-07-17 15:32:19
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You and your GOOD poems. Psh. I scoff at your impecible words. I laugh at your brazen talent and I spit on your superb poetry. Good job with this. I really liked it. :)
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Posted by Tarhead Mugwump
2008-07-27 10:29:43
feeling backwards
maybe it's the room 1135 side of me - but i read this from the spirit side until i got to the comments.
being a happy spirit and having your space invaded by a bunch of grumpy ones, or a bright energy in a place of sadness...
wonderful as always, sara
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Posted by Terry Collett
2008-08-01 14:00:22
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You are still as good as ever sister. Darn good.
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Posted by onyxdragon
2008-10-02 18:53:53
Good description
... of those who have "seen" things they cannot explain and cannot get anyone to believe or understand.
Too often the request is simple in such cases, it seems, but the response is so complex.
A nice piece of work covering several aspects of a "haunting."
At least, that's what I thought.
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