Posted by Zombie Punk
2008-07-12 16:28:27
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hehe this was really creative and a fun read! really fun thing to sing outloud, thats right i sing. especially annoying songs in crowed elevators! hahahahah!
great poem
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Posted by brandon_scott
2008-07-12 19:34:29
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Yeah, this was pretty good. It was a lot of fun to read, and creatively constructed. I've wanted to write something like that, only in a spiral or something. However, I'm afraid that an undertaking like that would cause my Microsoft Word program to turn in its resignation.
I didn't sing this poem. I don't know the tune. Maybe Punk can help me with it. Is it Happy Birthday?
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Posted by Something Indecent
2008-07-12 22:23:42
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You sing in crowed elevators? Don't they start pecking at you? Nice format on this one amie. You finally made one of your poems fun to read. j/k No but seriously I'm not. Good job. :)
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Posted by Amatayo
2008-07-13 01:20:07
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yeah
this was alright.
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Posted by June Eclipsis
2008-07-13 07:58:54
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Lol. This has got to be the best poem I've ever read. Very fun to read. It's great to think outside the box!
I liked how the arrangement of the words were related to the topic. It was fun, but it also helped the reader to be able to feel the message of the poem.
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Posted by Pilgrim
2008-07-13 10:45:33
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Things I enjoy the most when I read poetry are a good message that flows well, and also originality. This is original and works well. The words bring you into a good flow and experience. Well done.
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Posted by philneale1952
2008-07-13 14:25:18
??????????????????
Whilst totally in agreement re the quality fo the piece, what's with the image?????????????????????
Nice style.
Phil
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Posted by Squall1
2008-07-13 14:46:56
Hah
Yeah, a bit cheesy but creative nonetheless. It must have taken a while to come up with. Sometimes simplicity is good and I think you accomplished you goal well.
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Posted by lemon
2008-07-13 15:50:33
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Thanks for the comments!
Phil: The image kind of reflects how I felt that day lol.. too stupid to even view an icon haha.
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Posted by r.e.potter
2008-07-14 15:40:35
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Ms Lemon, you done seem to have just way to much time on them thar hands.
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Posted by allmine
2008-07-14 15:42:50
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Shit I need the meds again! It was creative and I applaud the fact that you made the poem post like you wanted it to. But you must have some serious time on your hands, or be in a silly mood!
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Posted by Tarhead Mugwump
2008-07-27 15:35:29
it is always
nice to see somebody manipulate the screen as well as the words...
really enjoyed reading this one.
unfortunately, i couldn't see an image so i guess i'm jus plain...
write on!
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Posted by wcromart03
2008-08-16 14:45:14
Well done
Well done poem but where was the bad day in the poem or did I miss the point
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Posted by lemon
2008-08-17 16:04:04
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lol kind of. the entire poem was describing how i felt on that particular day.. off center and like a waste of space. :)
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