Posted by Zombie Punk
2008-07-11 21:17:15
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Beautiful Poem, Pollyanna. I especially like this because I'm Irish, but never been to Ireland :(. It would be so cool to go there.
On the other hand, here's a little Irish jig
"I drank with a man and he called my wife fat/so I knocked him down and shat in his hat."
Funny, huh?
It's okay, you can laugh.
I am.
Great Poem, by the way!
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Posted by brandon_scott
2008-07-11 22:18:56
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That was a beautifully descripted poem. I can feel the longing that the one in the story has for Ireland, and it makes me want to visit there. I'm not sure if I'm Irish or not. Good story anyway!
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Posted by The 13th
2008-07-12 00:40:06
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I've noticed youre Irish themed poems.Really good stuff.
This was was really good.
I live in Ireland, up the wicklow mountains.Beautiful place.Just thought I would tell you that useless peice of information*lol
See ya.
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Posted by Hodders
2008-07-12 09:09:22
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Beautiful poem! Loved every line in it. I've been to Ireland and know how beautiful it is so this poem really spoke to me. Really great poem, keep em coming!
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Posted by philneale1952
2008-07-12 09:43:21
Sara
I would love to live in the world you paint..............but the mortgage repayments would be too high.
Loved it.
Phil
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Posted by Pilgrim
2008-07-13 12:42:09
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Good patriotism. Ireland is a beautiful, yet rugged country. Your poetic technique and structuring were good. I like how you used italics, that gave off a dreamy kind of feeling as I read the words. Good job.
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Posted by June Eclipsis
2008-07-16 09:41:15
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This was a beautifully written poem. I have always loved the Irish scenery and landscapes. They are oh so beautiful. I liked how you brought that feeling out. It was wonderfully done and left me with a cool feeling.
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Posted by Tarhead Mugwump
2008-07-27 10:42:03
classic
X never marks the spot, just the thought.
write on!
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Posted by Terry Collett
2008-08-06 12:21:39
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Classic. mystical. Enjoyed.
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