Posted by Zombie Punk
2008-07-09 16:53:12
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Is this the point of view of the Ginger Bread Man? No, that the buttons! Not my gumdrop buttons! Hehe, Shrek is the kid's movie I like. and Nightmare Before Christmas (if ya cant tell from my pic)
Life doesnt always suck. Because it is so easy to put a :) instead of a :(
if that makes any sense at all.
Great poem you have here.
I have a question, though.
Do you know where the Muffin Man lives?
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Posted by MeredithsMontage
2008-07-09 16:53:43
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This flowed very nicely. Very sad and depressing but I really enjoyed it. I think most people will be able to connect with this as most people have felt they had nothing working right for them. A very good poem.
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Posted by fevilleg
2008-07-09 19:55:52
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haha wow somewhat depressing but it gets it's point across quite well. good job on this
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Posted by lemon
2008-07-09 21:08:23
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why yes! i DO know the muffin man!
really though the picture was just random...obviously it has nothing to do with the poem. i wrote this a couple years ago actually and i just now found it again when i was cleaning out some boxes :) Thanks for the comments
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Posted by resistanceisfreedom
2008-07-09 21:28:40
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well i have to say i really liked this. maybe it was because i didn't know you could write something depressing like this. i felt like i was reading my own poem haha. but really, it was a good read.
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Posted by Amatayo
2008-07-10 01:48:37
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When I say sick.
Do you think i'm ill.
When I say fantastic.
Will you say I pop pills.
When I say this poem got me thrilled.
Will you say I am un fulfilled.
If you don't know what I mean. I am saying this poem was "tight" um I mean. This was good.
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Posted by Behind_the_Mask
2008-07-10 14:24:24
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Hmm,
I didn’t hate it, and that’s a first for some poetry.
Max.
PROVE IT!
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Posted by The 13th
2008-07-10 14:40:57
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The other poem I read of yours was really cheery.
But Everyone feels like this from time to time.But Nicely wrote and I liked it.Good one Amy.
Is that the muffin man on Brewery lane.
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Posted by Something Indecent
2008-07-10 15:27:58
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Do you show this stuff to your church group? What would the children think amy? But yeah let me stumble on the bandwagon. Good poem with a depressing theme. Hooray!
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Posted by lemon
2008-07-10 19:18:36
Something Indecent
lol yes, I do share these with my church youth group. since they are teens they can relate haha!
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Posted by Pilgrim
2008-09-05 17:12:53
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Oh so true. Life does have its' many games. I quit playing after losing all the time. I hate to lose, wait, this could be another game. A game about quitting.
Anyway, good job.
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