My name is Raisa and I am a closer.

To many a closer won't mean much. I'm not a case closer for the police or a lawyer. I don't go around closing cabinet doors behind lazy people. I don't close a door after you've walked through. That would imply that I also open them, but that's far from the truth.

I am an eye closer, a room closer. So yeah, I guess I do shut the door eventually. I am part of an organization of assassins, and I'm the end deal. I'm the one they call when things need cleaning up. I wipe down the room. I clean up fingerprints, the blood and any other fluids to be found.

My job's not glamorous, but it pays the bills and there's an added security a young woman needs in this day and age.

Normally I'd be off the radar of the law, but just twenty-four hours ago, they showed up early. Now my life is at stake.

I've not slept or eaten since that botched job. Here's my story...

Keyword: assassin cleaning police

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Posted by Zombie Punk 2008-07-09 12:58:30 .... here's my story... where? i dont see it you know, i once had a job closing doors for lazy people. the pay sucked, though. This is a little mysterious and if done right can be a bloody fantastic story. Will be reading chapter 2. + Report this comment
Posted by Kasi elaborated 2008-07-09 13:39:08 .... Interesting start, but very short. This could be the prologue, but I guess thats what the beginning means. I am curious as to what happened in "the botched attempt".... I'll be looking out for the rest. + Report this comment
Posted by flossy 2008-07-10 00:31:20 .... Gotta agree with the Zp and Kasi.You gotta give the reader something to grab their attention so they go to chapter 2.This has nothing.The voice does'nt sound as if spoken by an adult with education.Sounds as if wroten by a kid. + Report this comment
Posted by philneale1952 2008-07-10 08:34:22 Arghhhhhhhhhhh Get on with it then..........I'm chewing my fingernails off here! You can't do this to me, you have no licence to infuriate. Helllppppp.......... Phil + Report this comment
Posted by chaabuk 2008-08-12 11:06:35 .... It seems an interesting beginning. There is light humor in the description. So, the assassin thought she was off radar. But in these jobs that can never be! Makes me curious to read what next! + Report this comment

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