I am building up barriers

I am making walls

To hold emotions in

Filled with pain and sorrow

And whatever comes with tomorrow

I have to hold in

But it keeps building up stronger

And I am afraid I'll will be stuck in pain

And I pray and pray

That the Lord will take it away

And He said to me

Those barriers will brake

Those walls will shake

And a flood of pain and sorrow

Will come rushing out

No more pain

No more sorrow

No more barriers or walls

Their all coming down

And you will be all right

You won't be stuck in pain

Keyword: I'll Be Stuck In Pain

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Posted by Kasi elaborated 2008-07-09 12:45:06 .... Wow. Tons of emotions here, good poem. The only thing I could nit pick about would be the line, "I've have to hold in", I think that may be a type-o of sorts. Either way I liked it! + Report this comment
Posted by alfred 2008-07-09 12:48:09 .... why is this guy so screwed up anyway. Pain in pain out..clap on clap off...easy as that. + Report this comment
Posted by Zombie Punk 2008-07-09 12:49:36 .... I like this poem, but I just cannot think of anything to say about it. My mind is blank. Maybe it got blown away from your poem. Great work! + Report this comment
Posted by Hodders 2008-07-09 13:30:07 .... Good writing but to me the subject of it seems a little confusing. I liked the layout and the content, just found it hard to discover the point of the poem. I liked the use of 'walls' and barriers'. Good job! + Report this comment
Posted by lemon 2008-07-09 14:30:58 .... i thought it was good. i like the title 'stuck in pain' lots of us feel like that sometimes. you put a lot of emotion in there. keep it coming =] + Report this comment
Posted by Xena 2008-07-09 16:28:38 can you ask him if he really hates gays? or if we just added it.. well shoot.. just ask him for a box set of the real bible + Report this comment
Posted by CliffMitchell 2008-07-09 21:04:41 .... Reading this, I feel as though the walls and barriers come as our own flesh and the holder of emotion is our soul; soon to be released from what our tattered temple has endured in our life span to return to our Creator. + Report this comment
Posted by Amatayo 2008-07-10 01:31:54 .... Through life we all go through pain. Weather it be in the flesh or mentally. But I found it better to let it out some how so it does not bring yo down. + Report this comment
Posted by ThatPsycoArtistFletcher10 2008-07-12 09:24:57 .... I think Alfred needs to come back to the real world. But anyway i think this was a good peom. + Report this comment
Posted by chaabuk 2008-07-23 19:28:57 .... This is simply heart warming. You have the word of God himself for easing out your pain. I believe in His word for He is the one who gives pain and he is the one who relieves us of it. Loved it. + Report this comment
Posted by Pilgrim 2008-09-07 14:38:03 .... Good. Another fast flowing faithful poem. In the third line from the bottom I noticed a slight error, did you mean, "They're?" + Report this comment

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