Posted by Zombie Punk
2008-07-08 23:48:00
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Beautifully written. Honestly, though, I had no idea what nihilty meant, but luckily i was in the middle of writing a story and my writing program has a dictionary. see, you taught me a new word.
cheer up, yo. lol.
hey, step back, step back, cuz yo rhymes are whack. fo shizzel dawg.
oh man, i think i'm gonna puke for even thinking those awful words. plaaauuuck! (thats me puking all over the wall by the way, in case you couldnt tell).
I really liked this 'cheery rhyme'. It seemed special. This be goen in my favorites list fo shizzel. pllaaauuuck! eww...
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Posted by Sad Sara
2008-07-08 23:54:56
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Hehe, that funny Max, I always strive fer nausea when I write Poem, it look like I either finally achieve this, or yer juss have little sissy stomach thing goin' on.
I not know, and as yer know, I not like speculate either, especially about something as sensitive as yer stomach contents.
Whatever hell that mean, I not know.
But I think yer do...
Thanks Max fer say yer like Poem I write.
Keep well,
'Anna
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Posted by fevilleg
2008-07-09 00:50:08
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this was an great poem. i thoroughly enjoyed it. are you familiar with the writings of camus or sartre? I fucking love existentialism.
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Posted by philneale1952
2008-07-09 03:31:03
Nothing
Not easy to write something about nothing - even more difficult to turn that into poetry.
Good effort Anna. I do like stuff like this. Big fan of poetry that actually rhymes and has some kind of rhythmic flow.
Thanks
Phil
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Posted by garyowen
2008-07-09 03:41:36
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I have to say anna that this piece depressed me and for the life in me I can't understand why?
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Posted by Sad Sara
2008-07-09 04:15:57
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Thank yer Phil, fer read me Poem and leave nice comment, it always a pleasure to read yer thoughts.
Aye Gary this Poem depressed yer because it fookin' sad man, that not reason to depress yer then maybe yer should read Fade to Shade or Sordid Orbs I write while back.
Oh, and of course there's me stoopid cancer collection, that always good buzz kill too.
Hehe
Thank yer Gary fer read Poem I write and leave behind what yer felt, that very cool to me.
Keep very well.
Aye, yer nice gentlemen, the both of yer.
'Anna
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Posted by Something Indecent
2008-07-09 06:26:55
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You didn't know what nihilistic meant Maxwell? Has the Big Lebowski taught you NOTHING!?
But yes Anna your poem was good as always *rolls eyes*. Why don't you write a bad poem so I don't have to be say nice things to you. j/k I did like this though.
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Posted by Pilgrim
2008-07-09 08:03:53
WOW
I love this. It's beautiful as usual. You have a real gift for writting Anna.
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Posted by alfred
2008-07-09 13:11:33
got one
It had a nice poetic flow. I liked it.
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Posted by Hodders
2008-07-09 14:15:28
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Great poem as usual! Keeps you reading all the way through and has a strong underlying message. The rhyme structure seems completely natural so that you barely notice it while reading. Good job!
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Posted by Amatayo
2008-07-10 01:19:07
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This was the best poem I have read of yours. But then this is one of the first one of yours have understood with having to look anything up. This was really good.
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