Posted by Zombie Punk 2008-07-08 01:36:11 ....
     This one was very easy to visualize.
I thought the name of poem was pretty cool sounding.
And, as every other poems I read of yours it was bloody terrific.
Kudos once again. + Report this comment |  |
Posted by indianaman130 2008-07-08 01:40:45 ....
you seem to hide and hint about and around a love long lost. Was it free will or fate that caused minds to divide? excellently written and thought out + Report this comment |  |
Posted by Kasi elaborated 2008-07-08 11:17:54 ....
     Once again you have created a beautiful poem, I enjoy the emphasis on emotions all your poems have, and they all contain great poetic structure. Another job well done! + Report this comment |  |
Posted by MeredithsMontage 2008-07-08 14:11:44 ....
     Beautiful poem. I really enjoyed. Thanks for hitting a soft spot. + Report this comment |  |
Posted by brandon_scott 2008-07-08 15:57:55 ....
     I hve a very vague notion of what you were trying to say in that poem, but I loved it. It flowed so smoothly, rhymed so well, and sounded so good that I don't even have to understand its obviously profound meaning to truely appreciate it. Beautiful. + Report this comment |  |
Posted by r.e.potter 2008-07-08 20:28:24 ....
     You have a special talent. I can't say anything else. + Report this comment |  |
Posted by Dirkin 2008-07-08 20:48:31 ....
     I love how abstract your messages are! Thats something I have never been able to achieve. + Report this comment |  |
Posted by philneale1952 2008-07-09 03:43:45 ....
     Potter, you stole my line........now all I have is a lump in the throat.
Good poem.
Phil + Report this comment |  |
Posted by Amatayo 2008-07-10 01:11:25 ....
     This was nice and very vivid. "Wait someone said that already" Well they stole what I was going to say. But this was nice.
Yeah + Report this comment |  |