Lost in transgression.

 Officer of death.

 My path is one of chaos.

 And a certified mess.

 Non calculating fate.

 And the offspring of hate.

 I am a boy, no I am a man.

 Who holds controversy in his hand.

 The stranger in your soul.

 And the reason for the cold.

The bringer of drought.

And the fear of being old. 

I am the reason you need to be consoled.

Keyword: Thought's of my Soul

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Posted by Zombie Punk 2008-07-07 19:49:47 .... This one made the hairs on the back of my neck stand up. It had a very creepy, dark vibe to it. Excellent choice of rhyming. It flowed smoothly. Great Poem! + Report this comment
Posted by Amatayo 2008-07-07 20:05:00 .... This poem I made with the hope it can get everyone thinking about do they think their soul would say if it where to appear before them. Do you believe it would give you a message of hope or malediction. So next to you find your self alone just sit and try to hear that voice in the back of you mind. The one that wants to be heard. And see what it is saying. + Report this comment
Posted by ams 2008-07-07 20:16:04 .... amatayo, the poems that ive been reading by you recently just keep getting better. they've really come a long way. i especially liked the last line of this one. its like im my own worst enemy. it flowed pretty nicely too. + Report this comment
Posted by lemon 2008-07-07 20:55:40 .... This was interesting. I'll agree with Punk, it was a little creepy the way you said 'The stranger in your soul. And the reason for the cold.' Coldness is associated with death or desolation. Grood job =] + Report this comment
Posted by Kasi elaborated 2008-07-07 21:06:33 .... This one was clear and well delivered, yes a bit creepy, makes you think. Is this another answer to all the death poems. Either way it was well written. + Report this comment
Posted by Amatayo 2008-07-07 21:24:05 .... This is not another "DEATH" poem. This is just another "THOUGHT" poems. Where I try to write what something would think. yeah. + Report this comment
Posted by Dirkin 2008-07-08 00:19:01 .... I definitely sensed a dark vibe to this one, though I had trouble understanding its meaning. + Report this comment
Posted by brandon_scott 2008-07-08 14:52:08 .... Yeah, that was a little disturbing. It took me a couple times of reading it to say "Hmmm, I think I like it", but in the end you won me over. However, I thought the rhyming scheme was just a little off. + Report this comment

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