Posted by philneale1952
2008-07-07 08:19:39
Rivalry
Nice tale of sibling rivalry, and it's not limited to same sex.
Our two fight like cat and dog and there's eight years between them.
All the things you portray here have happened to me, both with our children and with my own sister.
Brought back many memories now that they're both grown up and sis is far away.
Thank you.
Phil
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Posted by June Eclipsis
2008-07-07 13:27:11
brilliant
That's a very interesting idea to include several poems into one entry. Maybe I could try that...save some credits. Lol. Of course, the topics would have to be similar.
I loved the emotions and how each one varied. I liked the titles as well, as they fit perfectly with the poems.
Very well done!
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Posted by brandon_scott
2008-07-07 14:41:07
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Very well thought out and written. I, too, have a sister that I seem to have lost touch with- or were we ever really in touch? I'm not sure. Maybe I should give her a call...
Good job!
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Posted by bubbly
2008-07-07 18:26:10
sisters
hi! c.
u stole my heart with this lovely poem about sisters. so intensely emotional and touching.
reminded me of my younger sis. but now, i don't mind her. in fact, i look forward to her fights with me.
keep it up. lol. ;-)
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Posted by lemon
2008-07-07 20:46:25
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These were really good. I like your writing style here. these are very whimsical. they flow like water. GREAT JOB keep it up =]
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Posted by Amatayo
2008-07-08 00:27:05
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I did not understand this until I read the comments and then I kind of got it. But it still was a little out there. But this was a okay poem-ish so good job.
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Posted by Dirkin
2008-07-08 01:28:45
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My reaction to this poem was to imagine ways the stanzas applied to my own brother and sister, in which case I felt very connected to this poem. It didnt have a traditional structure or rhythm, but in this case that seems like a perfect choice. Well done
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Posted by chaabuk
2008-07-23 19:35:35
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I've a younger sister. We used to fight like cats and dogs (I was the cat and I was the dog too) and all for no reason. There was no rivalry too. But that was how we were. Your poem reminded me of those years.
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Posted by harmattan
2008-08-05 10:31:29
sister
I am new.
Came here because I had seen you on other's pages.
Never had a sister, so will not comment. It is beyond my imagination.
But I like your style.
Will now move to another of your things.
Kind regards
Harmattan
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