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Mirror, Mirror, Chapter 7


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Written by Philip Neale   
Monday, 07 July 2008
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And finally.......................

 

 

"Mummy! Mummy look at this. Dad says I can't possibly wear anything so hideous tonight. You said it would be alright didn't you?"

 

Melanie came racing down the stairs and into the lounge, her face red with indignation. Pauline looked slowly around the room and stood in complete silence as she came to terms with events of the past few moments. They had all reeled as the heavy glass object crashed into the far side of the mirror, and she had stepped forwards as the figure of Melanie disappeared backwards in the foggy air generated by the explosion of fragments into the Colmores' lounge. She reached out automatically but the hand of Maria prevented any further movement and the entire scene vanished before her eyes.

 

Now she was standing in the lounge of her own home all those years ago with her twelve year old daughter before her with arms folded and shoulders hunched in an all too familiar pose. Derek took great delight in winding Melanie up at the drop of a hat, and in this instance it was clearly something to do with the clothes which she proposed to wear after coming back from her friend's house where she had stayed the night.

 

"Mummy? Mummy, you alright?"

 

"What, oh yes of course dear, just thinking. Look, tell your father to stop being a fool and get on with whatever he's doing."

 

"OK!" Now smiling sweetly at gaining what she regarded as a major victory, the little minx skipped away towards the door. She turned at the last moment.

 

"Oh, excuse my manners. I'm Melanie and she's my mum. ‘Bye"

 

Pauline frowned, curious at her daughter's parting comment to an area just over her own right shoulder. An uneasy feeling crept down her spine and she turned, turned so very slowly that minutes seemed to have passed by the time she came face to face with none other than Maria. A strangled scream died in her throat and she sat down involuntarily in a chair as the smiling figure approached.

 

"But..........you're.........I mean you can't...........it's........."

 

"Please calm down Pauline. It is me, I'm here and I'm real"

 

"But how?...........Everyone else?...........Where...........?"

 

"Back with their families and in their own times I would imagine. It seems that time has stood still whilst you and I have been away."

 

"But you're here. I thought you were from years back."

 

"Nineteen fifty-nine was the year I disappeared."

 

"So, what are you doing here? How will you get back to your family?"

 

"I won't" Maria snorted "If you could call it a family."

 

She went on to explain how her husband had mistreated her throughout the entire length of their marriage, and how his family with whom they lived had treated her as some kind of unpaid servant for the six years that she had lived there. The mirror, for her, had come as a sort of knight in shining armour astride a white steed. The last thing she wished for was a return from whence she had come.

 

"I think I always knew what would happen if someone did break the curse, and when the opportunity came, I simply held on to your arm. If I am trapped now it is in your time, and believe me it is preferable to mine."

 

"What will you do? Things have changed an awful lot in the last fifty years."

 

"If living with my David taught me just one thing, it was the ability to make my way without any help from anyone else. I certainly would not have been given any assistance by his family. They'll have to get along without me. I will be alright."

 

"Well you certainly can't go out alone until you've become accustomed to how things work now. I insist that you stay with us for the time being. We'll have to replace those clothes of yours though, and you look to be about my size. Come on before anyone sees you."

 

Suitably attired, Maria joined the rest of the evening's gathering at the housewarming and was soon the centre of attention as a stranger in their midst. Pauline took some time out to try to assimilate what had happened during her apparently brief spell of absence. The mirror was certainly gone and its place above the fire was occupied by a print of Constable's ‘The Haywain'. She had seen her Melanie happily married and twelve years older and wondered about the Colmores. Derek broke the spell with a sudden entrance from the patio.

 

"Ah, there you are. This acquaintance of yours is causing quite a stir outside. Like bees round a jam pot they are, and one or two of our single friends have their eyes on her. Where did you meet her?"

 

"Hmmm? Oh, I was in an antique shop and we bumped into each other. Seemed to hit it off right away and I asked her over on the off chance. You don't mind do you?"

 

"Of course not. Look there's a family not arrived just yet, can you keep a look out for them. Denise and Melvyn Hartington's their name" He looked at his watch "Said they'd be here by now."

 

As Derek left the room Pauline wondered where it was that she had heard of that name before, but try as she may it just wouldn't come to her. She shook her head, dismissed the frown from her face and was making for the kitchen when the front door bell rang. She was halfway down the hall when Melanie beat her to it.

 

"Hello, I'm Melanie and that's my mum. Have you come to the party?"

Denise Hartington smiled at the greeting and made a play of shaking Melanie's hand. She was followed indoors by her husband Melvyn and their fourteen year old son, Roger.

 

"I'm awfully sorry we're late, it's all my fault. I insisted on buying an old mirror at a car boot sale and made Melvyn hang it before we came. It took longer than we thought and I was going to cry off but Roger insisted we come. Strange, he's never done that before."

 

Derek appeared at that point, and greeting their tardy guests, escorted them out into the back garden to join the rest of the company. Pauline stood in stunned silence. Roger Hartington. No, it couldn't be. What did Denise say? She'd bought a mirror at a car boot sale? Surely not, Pauline had seen it destroyed, in pieces on the floor of the Colmores' lounge just before everything vanished. Her attention was caught by Melanie who had remained at her side when Derek and his guests moved away.

 

"It's alright now mummy. The mirror's done its job."

 

"What?"

 

"Nothing" Smiling so sweetly she turned to Roger. "Come on Roger, I'll show you round the place. I've got a feeling we're going to be great friends."

 

 

 

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Comments (5)
Posted by d.dasgupta
2008-07-07 03:34:53
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A good deal happened in this instalment. Still trying to digest. The idea of time standing still is fascinating. I am reminded of the Ode to a Grecian Urn. Irrelevant remark. Maria not ageing by holding on to Pauline's arm was a nice tour de force. What she'll do henceforth need not be answered by the author. Which is fine. And finally Melanie's remark about the mirror having done its job was quite unexpected. What was the job? To produce for Pauline a view of the future? An experiment in the art of abstraction perhaps? Physicists measure the force of gravity by creating artificial vacuum. Your abstraction lay in letting time move on with Pauline removed and made to sit in the movie theatre watching how events were preordained to occur whether or not she existed. She is turned willy nilly into a crystal gazer. Everything fits into place, except Maria, Melanie's comment and the mirror making a reappearance. May be Maria needs it -- she's lived too long. Great work.
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Posted by lemon
2008-07-29 16:44:29
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Love the ending! It leaves a BIG opening there even though Mel said the mirror had already done its job. Wonderful story as a whole =]
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Posted by Zombie Punk
2008-08-14 05:39:18
Mirror, Mirror, Chapter 7

Oh my, my, Phil, you should be proud. I give you a standing ovation on this one, buddy. This would probably have to one of the best stories I have read on and off this site in a long time. I just loved this tale, and such a great way to end it!

Cheers,

Max
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Posted by harmattan
2008-08-27 14:59:25
mirror mirror

Phil, this was a super epic tale of evil and coincidences

But Wilde's Dorian Grey never crossed your mind?

Pat has had a mirror like this in the loft for years.

I am not the least bit surprised that two authors used the same title for a story about a mirror.

The most famous mirror of all fairy tales was always addressed as "Mirror, mirror, on the wall...

Kind regards

Harmattan
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Posted by gtmike
2008-08-27 21:08:07
Re. plagarism

Hey Phil, Have to agree with harmatton on this one. I wouldn't be to hard on the girl. I've tried to think of a mirror story that didn't involve another world on the other side and came up blank. Lewis Carrol with Alice going through the looking glass, to Freddy Krueger in the slasher movies, mirrors have always held some kind of bad juju. Good story though. I liked the build and the twists, the only criticisim I have is for the tendency to tell too much. I've noticed the pros tend to hint at what's going on and gives us bits and pieces rather than revealing it in one exponential paragraph, like when we were told the history of the mirror. I noticed because I'm guilty of the same thing myself. I want to advance the story and move on, but I think it's better to make the reader work a little. Really good yarn though.GTMike
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