Concentrating I come to the battle field.

The place where the true Amatayo will be revealed.



With a blink of the eye he disappears.

And manages to take with him a piece of my ear.



So I strike back as fast as I can.

And grab a hold the palms of my hands.



In the middle we both do meet.

Taking body parts so we can complete.



As the battle rages on.

It seems that all the body is gone.



But the bout is not yet done.

For we have gotten all but one.



Looking up my dark side sees.

The mind that controls the outer me.



Lifting off he starts to fly.

And I feel I'm about to die.



So I stand and start to think.

About my falmily and my peeps.



Falling down my dark side crashes.

And the stolen parts go up in ashes.



For the thing I did not see.

Was that happiness, gives him atrophy.
 


With my mind I form a cage.

A small and dark sinister enclave.



And grabbing hold I push him in.

Ending the battle with my twin.

Keyword: Dual Personality part 3 the conculsion

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Posted by Zombie Punk 2008-07-04 19:42:37 .... each of these poems are the same stupid thing. try coming up with some fresh material. we all know you have like a dozen other personalties you dumbass. Oh yeah, you mispelled family. + Report this comment
Posted by Pilgrim 2008-07-04 20:27:01 .... I've seen you do a lot better. Death was better than this. In your rhyming scheme, think and peeps don't go together, you might want to try other words. + Report this comment
Posted by Amatayo 2008-07-04 21:03:03 .... What the hell you mean each of these poems are the same? The first one starts off the good side talking to the bad. Then the second one starts with the dark talking to the light. Then I ended it with a show down between them both. I would have done this better but I have been swamped at work and I said that I would get it out today. + Report this comment
Posted by A.T.O.M. 2008-07-04 23:25:00 wow i didn't mean a weak attempt i meant the dark side of you is too weak to take over i like the dual personality scheme + Report this comment
Posted by Xena 2008-07-05 18:40:48 So..... he basically kills himself? well thats no good... didnt he know he was the same person? I would like to stumble upon that one.. id laugh... id say.. hey man. who are you fighting.. your dual personality or somthing haha... and then hed say yes.. and then id keep walking + Report this comment
Posted by Zombie Punk 2008-07-05 18:42:10 .... your comments get funnier and funnier...lol + Report this comment
Posted by June Eclipsis 2008-07-05 18:53:41 ... Not sure what to think. There's an evident simplicity, yet a haunting complexity in your poem. + Report this comment

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