Posted by lemon 2008-07-02 17:57:01 ....
     Good. I liked it. there seems to be a lot going on there besides admiration, but that could just be me. keep it coming =] + Report this comment |  |
Posted by CliffMitchell 2008-07-02 18:25:36 ....
     Creativity is bittersweet and inspiration is not always the easiest thing to find. Only the patient ones catch lightning in a glass. Great writing. I'm not sure if your intentions are to write prose poetry, but if they're not, you've got an exceptional head start. + Report this comment |  |
Posted by Amatayo 2008-07-02 21:58:17 ....
     Um all I can say is what?
YEAH WHAT? WHO OR WHAT WHERE YOU TALKING ABOUT.
"Hello my shimmering Muse" MEETS OLD PIECE OF CRAP TAKE THIS BACK TO THE DRAWING BOARD AND BALL IT UP YOUR DONE. + Report this comment |  |
Posted by resistanceisfreedom 2008-07-02 22:14:26 ....
     well i disagree with amatayo, i thought this was pretty good. it was an inspiring poem. + Report this comment |  |
Posted by garyowen 2008-07-03 03:05:32 ....
Good poem. Well written and honest. + Report this comment |  |
Posted by allmine 2008-07-03 08:34:13 ....
     More of a stream of consciousness than a strict poem. Creativity is fickle and if you can capture it, then you are lucky. All in all, I think you captured the essence of what you were trying to say. Flow is a little difficult, but like I say, it doesn't always have to have a rhyming structure + Report this comment |  |
Posted by A.T.O.M. 2008-07-05 13:03:06 well
     actually amatayo your wrong this poem is very creative i agree and it was long enough and ive had this feeling now i know how to express it in poems great job =] + Report this comment |  |