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Written by Jessie Masoner   
Wednesday, 02 July 2008
 

A WoW Story

Author: Jessie Masoner

 

A flash of light and I'm off the tree moments later it bursts into flames, upon landing on the ground I quickly roll out of the way of a swing of his sword. As I rise to my feet I notice the rotters surrounding us are not moving towards me but instead they are moving with the fight, changing their position to give us a specific amount of room, I do not know what will happen if I try to escape but I know that this match between us was meant to be between the two of us.

He comes at me again, his helmet is blocking a view of his face but I already know who he is, as I dodge his attacks I try to speak to him, "Tell me something young Paladin, or is it Death Knight now, where has your master gone?"

"What my master does is none of your business." Every move he makes is precise it takes all of my concentration to avoid being cut into pieces, still I ask him questions antagonizing him hoping he will get enraged into a frenzy so I can take him down.

"So you must be the murloc who I have heard so much of, the one who was brought in by Uther the Lightbringer himself. Yet you go against everything he taught just as his other student, Arthas Menethil I am sure you have heard of him, the one who murdered the man who took you in."

"I am nothing like Arthas."

"That is what you think, have you looked at yourself lately?

"What I look like does not matter."

"Have you fallen so far to the dark side that you cannot see the truth? The dark magic you are using has corrupted your body so greatly that it shows."

"Enough talk, you will not dissuade me from my path."

 

With that said he renewed his attack, at first it was like his old fighting style, as time wore on his strikes began to be quicker and stronger, it was as if he was using the darkness around him to empower himself. That was when I first spotted it, his minions were slowly dieing off one at a time. With my eyes diverted from him he took the chance and lunged for me hitting his mark he let his sword slip from his hands. As I fall to the floor clutching his blade I hear two voices shout in anger, surprised to see my two friends rushing towards me destroying any of the rotters in their path, I roll over on my side, I drop the blade and hold where it was previously located.

 

"Sir, are you ok?" Fluffie, asks me with a sad look on her face.

"Fluffie, don't worry a bit I shall be fine." I say, wincing in pain when they try to move my hand from the spot where the blade was located.

"Boss..." is the only thing Nagasae can say without turning around and clutching his sword.

"Hey now you two, don't go looking at me with those sad faces, I will be fine I was distracted, but no need to worry I will finish this off if decides not to come with us."

"Boss, do.....do you want me..... to finish this for you?"

"Why of course not, I will be done in no time and he is quite powerful, but I have a different task for you. What I need is, you to destroy all of the rotters. No question asked."

Facing the Death Knight, "Now because I am running out of time I shall ask you one more time, will you come back to the light?"

"No matter how strong you think you are I am even stronger."

"I shall take that as a no, I must apologize I will try to make this as painless as possible."

"Painless..."

With that said I begun my attack; before he moved a muscle I disappearing on the spot I reappeared behind him; with him turning around I felt the adrenaline dump into my blood. Before he finished his turn I stepped through the shadows once again to appear in the air to his back. With his entire back exposed I chose to go for his legs, with another dash through the air I was a few feet away from him. He laughed at me and said, "Is that all you got?"

He started to walk towards me, after several steps he stopped and blood sprayed everywhere. Looking down at his no longer connected leg he placed the two halves together and within moments they fused back into one piece. "That is a new trick, tell me are these your own powers or powers that are on loan from your master?"

"My powers are my own."

"Then show me the extent of your power!"

With that he raised his hand, the area around his hand was darkening as he was muttering, after a few moments he opened his eyes slightly and when he spotted his target he stretched out his hand and the next thing I know I was hearing screams from behind me. As I turn to look behind me time slows down as my turn that should have taken ten seconds feels like it is taking ten hours, when I finally complete my turn I locate where the screams were coming from.

Copyright 2008 Jessie Masoner
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Comments (9)
Posted by Behind_the_Mask
2008-07-02 15:43:56
So yeah..

Kinda hit a block there at the end,

I want to leave what is going to happen a mystery until the next chapter.

Tune in next time.
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Posted by Behind_the_Mask
2008-07-02 15:47:16
...also...

Also its a bit shorter than i would have liked with the ammount of time i spent on it.
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Posted by lemon
2008-07-02 15:48:18
....

very interesting. There was a lot of suspense and action. I remembered reading the other installments awhile ago, but I think I'll go take a refresher. keep it coming =]
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Posted by Zombie Punk
2008-07-02 15:52:18
Gory Fun!

-couple of run on sentences. I think you meant 'escape' instead of 'escaper'. You seemed to have switched between past and present tenses quite a lot. Some of the dialogue I was confused on who was speaking.

+excellent details. You truly have a knack for fantasy dialogue. the end leaves me wanting more.
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Posted by Behind_the_Mask
2008-07-02 15:54:35
...dang

Dang it that is what I was afraid of, past and presents tense; first and third person view. I kept thinking back did I do that in past tense or present tense, or first person or third person.
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Posted by slavetolove
2008-07-02 21:27:39
i see

had me guessing the whole way through loved it little problems but good
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Posted by philneale1952
2008-07-03 05:45:55
Tidy Up

The thing with cleaning up the text is to print it out and either read it aloud to yourself, or to someone else.

Eyes cannot always see what is there, they see what the brain wants to be there, and therefore what you originally intended to write.

It's very easy to get carried away with a story, and sometimes the fingers move across the keyboard faster than the brain can keep up. That's when typos appear.

Your mixing up of temses is just one example of this. My main problem is story structure - particularly dates in lengthy ones, and it doesn't seem to matter how many times I proof read, there are always 'escapees'.

Don't get hung up on being 'blocked' - we all go through it. Try starting something else to give yourself a breather.

Keep the thing coming...........it's a good story, bordering upon a saga and well worth pursuing.

Phil
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Posted by philneale1952
2008-07-03 05:48:42
Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

See what I mean about typos?

Temses? What the hell are those?????

Sorry

Phil
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Posted by allmine
2008-09-15 13:24:46
....

I liked this chapter better than the others. I think becuase I finally am beginning to understand what the hell is going on. Or maybe cause I understood what the hell was going on in this chapter. No matter....what happened to the rest of it? Huh? This is the last chapter and obviously it is far from finished....
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