Posted by philneale1952
2008-07-01 01:33:57
Sad
Kind of tragic. Is she appealing to him to stay, or to her own subconscious to make up her own mind for her?
Does she want him or not? Raises more questions than answers.
Liked it.
Phil
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Posted by allmine
2008-07-01 08:47:39
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Relationships are hard. It is human nature tyo continually look for something we don't have. I see a girl here who thinks she loves her husband, but looks to leave because she thinks that he doesn't love her. If he would show her how deep his love is, then there would be no issue
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Posted by Behind_the_Mask
2008-07-01 10:48:35
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I liked how you didn’t stick to one side; you went both ways with it.
It’s a bit sad; in the fact that love should be unquestionable and in this case it doesn’t appear to be so.
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Posted by resistanceisfreedom
2008-07-01 20:22:00
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i enjoyed it. thought you conveyed your message very well.
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Posted by Amatayo
2008-07-02 01:14:34
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A argument between your sub- conscious I can really relate. But the poem was not really to my liking. It may be because it did not take me out of this world but more or less left me in my seat. ( BU WHO)
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Posted by A.T.O.M.
2008-07-05 17:34:33
i liked it
good not much criticism to give
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Posted by chaabuk
2008-07-23 20:19:12
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The wife is in two minds. On a more conservative level, she can ask these dutiful questions but what is it she really wants. Either way her life is sad for she'll never know the truth either way.
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