Posted by Zombie Punk
2008-07-01 01:08:53
damn!
This one flowed terrifly. the last paragraph (i think they are called stanzas in Poetry) was just great! especially last two lines.
Tremendous fookin job, Anna
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Posted by Sad Sara
2008-07-01 01:25:32
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Thanks Max!
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Posted by philneale1952
2008-07-01 01:31:30
Wow.............
Absolutely beautiful. This one took my breath away, and I don't usually like poetry (particlauarly some of the oddball stuff on here).
There's a poet in everyone somewhere, but I think mine's taken a long vacation. Maybe you have enough for both of us.
Great piece of work.
Phil
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Posted by Sad Sara
2008-07-01 01:35:25
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Thanks Phil fer very nice and thoughtful comment.
Keep well,
'Anna
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Posted by June Eclipsis
2008-07-01 14:16:24
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This rocked. Totally awesome!
I absolutely love your poem, Anna. I can't hardly wait for your next one.
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Posted by resistanceisfreedom
2008-07-01 20:18:55
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yes, this one flowed incredibly well. love it!
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Posted by Amatayo
2008-07-02 01:10:27
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This was a nice poem. Just to bad that no one says they can't wait until my next poem. ( My face starts to chill as the tears start to short out my keyboard )< A amatayo STOP CRYING YOU SISSY, MAN UP> A shut up AMATAYO I don't care what you think. < HA ALL YOU DO IS CRY WHY AM I STUCK IN THIS BODY. I better go this is going to take a while.
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Posted by A.T.O.M.
2008-07-05 17:36:46
Man
amatayo please just shut up i know i am saying what everyone is thinking you try and promote yourself to much on other peoples poems just give your criticism like everyone else.....the flow was one i am proud of that i would like to have soon
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Posted by Pilgrim
2008-07-07 07:37:38
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I really liked this. All your poems are great.
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