Posted by June Eclipsis
2008-06-30 17:51:13
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I greatly enjoyed this. Beautiful use of words!
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Posted by lemon
2008-06-30 18:02:12
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This was nice. I really like the opening line 'Floral painted lady bugs' I don't know why but that sent a flurry of images in my head.
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Posted by Pilgrim
2008-06-30 19:47:33
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Good poem. However, the color of the words and the cursive hurt my eyes and took me away from the poem. Yet, that did cause me to read your words more than a few times.
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Posted by Zombie Punk
2008-06-30 21:11:39
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Okay, i'm gonna be honest: i had to go dig for a dictionary for this poem. but after twenty minutes and understanding poem ...wow, outstanding work.
ONCE AGAIN! grrr....
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Posted by fewix
2008-07-03 18:42:31
Wow
It's like a spell, in both the way it is written and it's effect on the reader.
I didn't like it until the last stanza though. I had to read it a few times before I really liked it.
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Posted by chaabuk
2008-08-20 23:39:14
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Brilliant. This is a charming piece of writing that I have read in recent times. One must always strive to strike a chord in a reader’s heart. You have achieved it in great measure. Good job. Keep it up. ;-)
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