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THE FALL OF ABRIA, Chapter 7


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Written by jake   
Sunday, 29 June 2008

HRUUNTAG SNORTED.

" MASTER, MY MASER, HAVE I PLEASED YOU?"

" YES,MY SERVANT. AND YOU SHALL REEP THE REWARD."

HRUUNTAG SMILES HIS CROOKED-TOOTHED SMILE. RIKKIESH PACED IN FRONT OF HRUUNTAG, THEN STOPPED, COMING TO A HAULT. HE PUT HIS GLOVED HAMDS ON HRUUNTAGS HEAD. HRUUNTAG SMLED.

" THANK YOU,MY LORD, THANK YOU."

RIKKIESH LAUGHED SHARPLY. HRUUNTAG SUDDENLY GREW AFRAID.

"MASTER?"

HIS FACE BEGAN TO TURN CHERRY RED, AND HIS SKIN BUBBLED LIKE OIL. HRUUNTAG SCREAMED IN PAIN. MELKON WATCHED IN HORROR. MERIAL FEIGNED TERROR. HRUUNTAG'S FACE BEGAN TO MELT AWAY, LEAVING NEARLY CLEAN SKULL. RIKKIESH LET THE CORPSE FALL OVER. THE DARK LORD THEN FACED MELKON, WHO HAD ALREADY TAKEN OUT HIS BLADE.

"AND WHAT DO YOU PLAN TO DO WITH THAT KING?"

" I PLAN TO RUN YOU THROUGH!"

"HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!JUST TRY IT!"

MELKON LEAPED FORWARD, RIKKIESH NOT EVEN BOTHERING TO REMOVE HIS BLADE. HE SIDE STEPPED THE BLADE, AND SENT A BEAM OF ENERGY AT MELKON. HE TOPPLED OVER, AND WAS QUICK ON HIS FEET. AS HE STOOD HE WAS CAUGHT IN BOLTS OF SEARING, LIGHTING-LIKE RAYS. RIKKIESH CACKLED,LIGHTING FLYING FROM HIS FINGERTIPS.

"WHAT NOW KING!"

MELKON WAS LIFTED INTO THE AIR, HIS CLOTHES SPARKING. HE WAS SUPRISED HE WAS NOT ALREADY DEAD. THE LIGHTING ASSAULT STOPPED, AND MELKON FELL TO THE GROUND. HIS CLOTHES WERE SEARED AT THE EDGES, AND HIS SKIN STILL RADIATED A SMALL AMOUNT OF ELECTRICITY. HIS EYES BEGAN TO BLUR, AND THE LAST THING HE HEARD WAS MERIAL'S SCREAMS, AND THEN, BLACKNESS.

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MELKON AWOKE, AND HIS EYES FLUTTERED. HE COULD FEEL HIS BODY VIBRATING. HE SOON REGISTERED WHAT WAS HAPPENING. HE WAS ON A WAGON, ONE OF MANY,MANY OTHER CARTS THAT CARRIED SLAVES OUT THE CITY. MERIAL WAS BESIDE HIM, A GASH IN HER HEAD, BUT OTHERWISE HEALTHY. THE CITY WAS IN RUINS. ALL THAT WAS LEFT NOW WAS RUBBLE AND DEBRIS. THE SKY WAS OUTLINED IN RED, AND COLUMNS OF THICK SMOKE STRETCHED TOWARDS THE SKY. EVEN THE COUNTRYSIDE LIED IN RUIN. TREES WERE BEING PULLED UP BY THE ROOTS AND BURNED, OILS AND POISINS WERE BEING POURED OVER FLOWERS AND GRASS BY THE BARRELS. DEMONS AND BEASTS, EVIL MEN, AND CREATURES OF EVERY SHAPE AND SIZE FILLED THE ENEMY PROFILE. DEAD DOGS, HORSES, AND OTHER ANIMALS WERE BEING TORN APART AND EATEN. THE WAILS AND LAMENTS OF ABRIAN'S, BOTH FROM KERIN, AND FROM OTHER TOWNS AND CITIES, FILLED THE DISTANCE, ALONG WITH THE THUNDER OF THE DARK LORDS VICTORIOUS ARMY.

 

 



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Comments (3)
Posted by flossy
2008-06-30 01:02:15
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I see on your profile our only 14.Well done, you have a great imagination.If you enjoy writing.Think about doing a writing class.Firstly the capital letters were doin my head in.Secodly keep an eye on your spelling.Dont give in and goodluck.
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Posted by colemoriss
2008-07-14 22:50:41
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I ENJOYED WRITTING THESE STORIES IMMENSELY, AND I HOPE THAT IN THE NEAR FUTURE I CAN WRITE ABOUT THE RISE OF RIKKIESH. IT ALL DEPENDS ON HOW BUSY I AM, OH WELL, WELL SEE. THIS IS MY OLDEST COOKED UP STORY, AND HAS BEEN IN THE FORMULATING PROCESS FOREVER.
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Posted by chaabuk
2008-08-20 22:49:11
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Exotic. This is a charming piece of writing that I have read in recent times. One must always strive to strike a chord in a reader’s heart. You have achieved it in great measure. Good job. Keep it up. ;-)
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