I finaly had what i always wanted...

but was it really what I wanted?

i held to it tight

thinking that with time all would seem right...

but sadly i was wrong, and it ended in the night.

But feelings come strong for another...

i am really starting to be bothered by this

my heart has ached about this.

But i know that my focus should be upon the Lord

and so i will grow in him,

in my art,

and in the word.

And some day i will find her.

Keyword: A peom 14th or 15th (heart issues)

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Posted by resistanceisfreedom 2008-06-27 22:47:56 .... hmmm.........focusing on the lord. sounds like a huge waste of time. + Report this comment
Posted by Amatayo 2008-06-27 23:04:35 .... Unlike resistanceisfreedom it is not a waste of time to write a poem about God. But the poem lost me in the beginning so if you could explain what was going on through it. + Report this comment
Posted by lemon 2008-06-27 23:16:01 .... Focusing on the Lord is a good thing. Concerning your poem though, I got a little lost. keep posting though =] + Report this comment
Posted by ThatPsycoArtistFletcher10 2008-06-28 05:19:35 .... Yeah i can see how you all got lost sorry about that. I might rewrite it. + Report this comment
Posted by resistanceisfreedom 2008-06-28 09:10:19 .... yea it is a good thing. he does so much for us. and it's not a waste of time to focus on a facade, yea i forgot. + Report this comment
Posted by novel.idea 2008-06-28 12:55:24 .... Why do you always have to number your poems (or peoms)? I think that you should have just put Heart Issues. Especially since you have lost count anyway. + Report this comment
Posted by Pilgrim 2008-06-28 22:38:30 .... Interesting. But it seems to convey that you would be using the Lord for your own gain. As if you will focus on the Lord to reap as a reward "her". + Report this comment
Posted by ThatPsycoArtistFletcher10 2008-06-29 12:15:09 .... I didnt mean for it to seem like that. I have just been rapped up in a relationship and i was not keeping my heart on Him. And she was differnt than i thought she was so i ended it and now im done with relationships until God shows me the right girl for me. + Report this comment
Posted by rtvols344 2008-07-06 17:00:52 .... I thought it was okay... but your topic kinda crumbled (if you know what I mean) but you should keep posting!!!!!! And don't be afraid to show your funny side!!! you have a GREAT since of humor! + Report this comment
Posted by E.Dover 2008-08-14 05:42:19 .... I Like God. + Report this comment
Posted by Zombie Punk 2008-08-14 05:44:16 .... I Like Me. + Report this comment

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