Posted by Zombie Punk 2008-06-27 07:24:42 ....
     hmmm...I'll admit that this one was a little confusing to me at first, Anna. But then i reread and I think I understand. Powerful poem. Well written. + Report this comment |  |
Posted by Sad Sara 2008-06-27 07:33:07 Escapism
Aye Max, thank yer fer read Poem about Megann. She character in book coming to life. She got bad circumstance she stuck in so relies on reminiscent happiness to maintain a little sanity while trying keep it hidden from madness.
Keep well,
'Anna + Report this comment |  |
Posted by resistanceisfreedom 2008-06-27 09:05:17 ....
     ah, i loved the flow to this one. it was indeed a powerful piece. Megann sounds like a very powerful person herself. + Report this comment |  |
Posted by Something Indecent 2008-06-28 17:04:22 ....
     I liked it. I don't know what else to say. All your stuff seems to flow well and be nicely worded. + Report this comment |  |
Posted by Pilgrim 2008-06-28 22:44:20 ....
     very good poetry. I hope we all can find a place like this as we traverse in this world that can, at times, be difficult. + Report this comment |  |
Posted by lemon 2008-06-28 22:46:36 ....
     nicely done. This flowed really well and your descriptions were vivid enough so that I could picture it in my head =] + Report this comment |  |