2008,NEW YORK

she smiled at him lovingly,he smiled back. he tossed over in the bed, and crawled out.

" john, you dont have to go today, stay with me..."

" no, baby, i can't... we are having a big meeting today, one of the biggest companies in the world have asked us to make a pitch for their product... i cant miss it."

" please, today is my birthday..."

" i know it s, georgia, and i promise i have something big planned for it... but after wor, okay."

" alright, well be safe..."

" i will." he gave her a kiss, and went into the bathroom.

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he sat in the conference, a stack of papers in front of him, he slumped over in his chair. he was bored.

" john, your turn."

john opened his eyes a little more, and walked up to the presentation board.

" well, first off, i think every product needs a good pitch, a funny tagline. and this product makes fun of itself," he said.

" benny, cut the lights."

the lights went out, and a picture of a condom appeared on the board.

" okay, well, how about this. trojan, superior strength, durability, and pleasure, just bring helen back."

everyone laughed. he smiled, and continued the presentation.

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georgia kept a close eye on the road, cars zooming beside her. she took a sip from her mug, and concentrated. she reached for her sunglasses on the dashboard, but they fell in the floor. she leaned over to pick them up, and the car swerved a tiny bit. she quickly took control of the wheel again. suddenly, a bat flew above the windshield, and crashed into it. she was startled, and she lost contol of the wheel. she swerved, honking her horn wildly. she tride to slam on the brakes, but it was futile. she screamed when she saw the railing of the bridge, then she watched as the hood of her car crashed through it, and flew ten stories into the air, crashing on the street below.

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Posted by Zombie Punk 2008-06-26 21:09:55 .... Hmm...the last paragraph seemed like that was the only thing that mattered in this chapter. There was some pretty pointless dialogue, too. And you really need to CAPITALIZE the FIRST word of your sentences and NAMES of people. + Report this comment
Posted by lemon 2008-06-26 21:34:47 .... Spelling and grammar (always ;)) but I don't see how this fits with the first chapter at all... Also, I kind of agree with Punk-again- that there seemed to be too much filler dialogue, not enough continuity with the previous chapter. but that might change when the next part comes out. =] + Report this comment

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