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Note to Self


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Written by Anna DeVine   
Wednesday, 25 June 2008
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Note to Self 



 



You pluck the stars from the night sky,
You place them in your pocket to keep,
You take them out and count one by one,
Then you claim them as your own and why?
Because only you - could be so arrogant.

Trust me on this one, disband the dream.
Icarus - naive child; got too close and fell
And why should you of all those succeed;
When all of your stars are gone by day?
You see - only you could be so arrogant.

At the hour of dusk, storm clouds brew
And into the gardens of night you enter.
But there are no stars to be seen tonight;
Still, you blame them for your ill fate?
A lesson goes unlearnt by you.


Still...


Arrogant 










Copyright 2008 Anna DeVine
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Comments (7)
Posted by Dirkin
2008-06-25 22:00:26
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Dam arrogance! Another excellent poem, perfect rhythm and structure
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Posted by Zombie Punk
2008-06-25 22:06:59
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yeah i agree with dirka dirka. Another beautiful written poem. So this one time i fell into a pit of lava because i made fun of arrogance, so i'd watch your back if i were you. they're everywhere! and if you are wondering who 'they' are, well, i am afraid that is classified, Pollyanna
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Posted by The Dark Advenger
2008-06-25 23:17:03
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Could you explain this to me.
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Posted by Sad Sara
2008-06-25 23:36:12
No problem

Of course I could explain this to you.

This:

Well the core meaning of the word 'This' could probably best defined as a grammatical word used to indicate somebody or something already mentioned or identified or something understood by both the speaker and hearer.

Thanks fer the inquiry on me Poem.

And please, do not hesitate or feel embarrassed to ask me if there are any other words that I may have incorporated in me verse here besides the word 'this' that you would like or need for me to explain to you.

Take care,

'Anna
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Posted by indianaman130
2008-06-26 01:39:20
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awsome
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Posted by Hodders
2008-06-26 05:34:10
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Loved it! I really enjoyed reading it because it flows great and you create excellent imagery within all of your poems.
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Posted by zenith
2008-07-30 16:37:24
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What you call arrogance can be just natural to him. People express themselves in many ways. The person here is trying to break the ordinary mould of thinking. Well written.
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