Posted by Dirkin 2008-06-25 22:00:26 ....
     Dam arrogance! Another excellent poem, perfect rhythm and structure + Report this comment |  |
Posted by Zombie Punk 2008-06-25 22:06:59 ....
     yeah i agree with dirka dirka. Another beautiful written poem. So this one time i fell into a pit of lava because i made fun of arrogance, so i'd watch your back if i were you. they're everywhere! and if you are wondering who 'they' are, well, i am afraid that is classified, Pollyanna + Report this comment |  |
Posted by The Dark Advenger 2008-06-25 23:17:03 ....
     Could you explain this to me. + Report this comment |  |
Posted by Sad Sara 2008-06-25 23:36:12 No problem
Of course I could explain this to you.
This:
Well the core meaning of the word 'This' could probably best defined as a grammatical word used to indicate somebody or something already mentioned or identified or something understood by both the speaker and hearer.
Thanks fer the inquiry on me Poem.
And please, do not hesitate or feel embarrassed to ask me if there are any other words that I may have incorporated in me verse here besides the word 'this' that you would like or need for me to explain to you.
Take care,
'Anna + Report this comment |  |
Posted by indianaman130 2008-06-26 01:39:20 ....
awsome + Report this comment |  |
Posted by Hodders 2008-06-26 05:34:10 ....
     Loved it! I really enjoyed reading it because it flows great and you create excellent imagery within all of your poems. + Report this comment |  |
Posted by zenith 2008-07-30 16:37:24 ....
     What you call arrogance can be just natural to him. People express themselves in many ways. The person here is trying to break the ordinary mould of thinking. Well written. + Report this comment |  |