She shines in the sunlight
and sparkles in the shitholes
she's so vulgar,so tasteful, she's got me breathless
she's just beauty wrapped in a pretty dress
she's the alpha and the omega
sends me looking for sex and death and everything serious
she's life and everything else
you want for more than once

she's got eyes of pure joy, searching for her own kind
she's pretty beautiful, she's that kind of girl
put her in front of a mirror, and she'd see a flower
she moves me to madness and back again
she's a miracle, she's the passion and the soul
oh muse, kiss me, kiss me, and take a drag on that cigarette
oh, I'm so upset you seem to see
what I'm trying to say

she's in the countryside, she's an urban girl
she made me fall from my ivory tower
she could strike a poet dumb, blind an artist
rip your senses to shreds and receive gratitude
she could be anything, but I'm glad she's herself
and though she probably sees me for who I am
at least she hasn't looked away yet.

Keyword: She and she alone

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Posted by r.e.potter 2008-06-24 20:38:10 scratching This has got me completely confused,,,sorry. This really wasn't a story or a poem, just really a ball of confusion. Not trying to be mean, but it seemed like you might have rushed this one. + Report this comment
Posted by lemon 2008-06-24 20:42:29 *scratching my head in confusion* Tell me if I'm wrong, but I saw this as someone normal enamored with someone who is crass and to use your term 'vulgar'. Maybe an example of extreme opposites attract? + Report this comment
Posted by lemon 2008-06-24 20:43:28 .... haha after i posted i saw potters comment and noticed that we were both scratching. :o| + Report this comment
Posted by r.e.potter 2008-06-24 20:46:10 that aint dandruff lol...im still scratching...but I beat you to the two credits...hehe + Report this comment
Posted by lemon 2008-06-24 20:49:40 maybe fleas? that you did. oh well, you can have them, i'm not all the way sold on the whole 'credit' idea anyway lol + Report this comment
Posted by Xena 2008-06-24 21:05:57 ehh not that bad and a girl with a sparkling shithole? sounds interesting + Report this comment
Posted by soulwriter 2008-06-24 21:10:16 .... Ah-hah, I didn't mean that. I meant she still looks good even when the background is really ugly and vile. + Report this comment
Posted by The Dark Advenger 2008-06-25 23:22:58 .... half and half. + Report this comment
Posted by Pilgrim 2008-07-04 17:37:40 .... Okay. Some of the comparison's in the beginning were sloppy, and as a matter of fact, disgusting. Yet it seems you love this female, and well, she seems to love you. Could be better, though. + Report this comment

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