Friday night always comes to slow

Friday night I just want to flow

I've been

duckin  weaving

lying cheetin

Givin takin

fixin breakin

wakin eatin

workin sleepin

All to be with you

Friday night babe I'm missing you

Friday night it can't come too soon

I'm breaking lose I'm free and ready

My motors running hot and true

You're almost here and babe I'm ready

Just to be with you

Friday night

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Posted by lemon 2008-06-24 13:11:42 .... This kind of sounds like it would be a song. =] I don't know about the format of this one though.. that whole middle part in italics kind of didn't fit to me. but then, it could just be me = + Report this comment
Posted by r.e.potter 2008-06-24 15:44:50 song,poem? Sounds like a bad country song. You forgot to tell her that you will be picking her up in your ford pick-up, and taking her down that ol red dirt road. + Report this comment
Posted by lemon 2008-06-24 15:58:39 .... lol potter. you were brash enough to say what I'm sure several readers thought. =] don't run over your dog with the ford pick-up either. :o| + Report this comment
Posted by resistanceisfreedom 2008-06-24 17:59:31 .... yea honestly a country song was the first thing that came to mind when i read this. and that could be why i didn't take much liking to it. + Report this comment
Posted by Terry Collett 2008-07-02 09:28:23 .... Fine piece, lyrical. "to" in first line ought to be "too". Otherwise good. + Report this comment
Posted by Pilgrim 2008-07-04 17:42:54 .... I agree with the other comments. This does seem like a song, and, maybe it is. Is it? + Report this comment
Posted by garyowen 2008-07-04 21:09:28 .... 'He's a poet he's a picker he's a prophet he's a pusher he's a pilgrim and a preacher he's a problem when he's stoned.' Aye lad, its song fer sure and maybe a bad country one at that? never heared a song yet that was worth a dam without poetry. + Report this comment
Posted by chaabuk 2008-07-28 22:19:05 Weekend I share this feeling of Friday night. At office, the last few minutes seem so long that i look at the watch every micro second and it seems the time has stopped. Those agonising minutes are like eons. Friday and Saturday nights are the best one can have and enjoy. Weekend ends so soon and..another dull working week. Alas! + Report this comment
Posted by harmattan 2008-08-10 07:02:00 Friday night Did not particularly like the poem but what is so wrong with country music It's the punks who've lost the plot. Or people who think spinal tap and the ruttles were real bands... Kind regards Harmattan + Report this comment

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