Posted by Dirkin
2008-06-24 00:30:17
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This is really good! I have always hated creed, oh man they suck. A friend played me 2 of their songs layered at once, and they were the exact same songs with different lyrics, same beat tempo and everything. Anyway...
very clever rhyming Anna.
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Posted by garyowen
2008-06-24 02:16:58
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Nice rap. I'm with you with the styrofoam.
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Posted by Terry Collett
2008-06-24 12:37:35
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This is excellent, Anna. You have my full attention.
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Posted by lemon
2008-06-24 13:02:10
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This was great! Now I know I'm not the only one with a belly button aversion lol =]
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Posted by resistanceisfreedom
2008-06-24 18:36:16
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wow, what a poem. this was so interesting to me. i liked reading about the things you hated and loved. very cool. again, you blew me away with this.
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Posted by Zombie Punk
2008-06-25 13:54:10
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ha! creed sucks and so does styrofoam, lets burn them all! throw them into the fire and watch the sparks fly! will they scream? oh i hope so, it isnt fun when they dont scream.
well, anyways, great poem, Anna, this one really stood out.
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Posted by Something Indecent
2008-06-28 17:11:39
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That was pretty sweet. I was with this girl once who always liked to finger my belly button. It was awful. Kind of creepy too. Anyway you rocked the shit out of this poem. Awesome job Anna.
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Posted by Pilgrim
2008-07-04 17:49:54
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I enjoyed the flow of this poem. Once I started, the words carried me to the end. So many writers forget that we write words into a current, not in still waters.
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Posted by Pookerdoo
2008-07-11 22:27:32
Bravo
I loved this work. You have a wonderful tallent. I really enjoy reading you work. This one is very memorable. Loved the after thought too.
Great job!
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