He's talking to me

With his sweet little voice

And he's making me crazy

Like heart pounding crazy

I just wanna hear him

Even on our email's

He makes me crazy

That heart pounding crazy

My heart beats up and down

I can't tame or shame it to settle down

It goes wild whenever he says my name

I feel like I am going to explode

Because my heart is over flowed

With love and happiness

He's got my heart pounding

Keyword: He's Got My Heart Pounding

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Posted by lemon 2008-06-23 21:18:19 .... Good. The flow was ok. I'd run a grammar/spell check next time. + Report this comment
Posted by garyowen 2008-06-24 05:00:17 .... You got that love... thing bad. The verse flowed well maybe a bit more imagination will bring a greater climax. + Report this comment
Posted by ThatPsycoArtistFletcher10 2008-06-26 16:44:03 .... I wonder who is this guy is? Jk i want go into your business. But this was a very good peom. + Report this comment
Posted by Xena 2008-06-26 17:11:51 i think shes talking about god.. or maybe jesus + Report this comment
Posted by ThatPsycoArtistFletcher10 2008-06-26 19:57:53 .... Ooops i feel stupid + Report this comment
Posted by ThatPsycoArtistFletcher10 2008-06-26 19:59:17 .... But Jesus and God are the same person. + Report this comment
Posted by ams 2008-06-26 20:09:49 .... in catholicism jesus is god's son but they are also the same person. it's called the trinity, because there's three persons in one God. i think of it as how water can exist in ice, water, or gas but its still all H2o if that makes any sense. but i dont think shes talking about god since it says that he sends her emails... good poem though + Report this comment
Posted by rtvols344 2008-06-27 10:15:52 .... No it's actually a guy! it does kinda seem like it is God who I am talking about but it's not... But all the other poems except for "Romatic Poem Tye Thing" are either for Him from Him or an idea He put in my head. + Report this comment
Posted by ThatPsycoArtistFletcher10 2008-06-27 19:30:42 .... Ok i dont feel studpid... but i do think i should say im sorry for joking about your personal life. + Report this comment
Posted by rtvols344 2008-06-28 12:23:08 .... Your my friend! Friend's joke about things!! I forgive you + Report this comment
Posted by Pilgrim 2008-07-04 17:53:31 .... To me, this sounds like something a adolescent would write in their notebook about a fellow student they had a crush on. But, maybe it is. + Report this comment

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