The beauty of the land is around us.
From the glimmering falls to the mid-night showers

The sound of the wind as it flows through trees.
To humming of birds and buzzing of bees

The shimmer and shine of a mid-day climb.
To the cool afternoon use to unwind

The beauty of earth is never passing.

Forever staying.

Everlasting......

Keyword: Earth's Beauty

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Posted by Amatayo 2008-06-22 11:32:25 This story This is a light hearted poem I made to be read and enjoyed during this summer heat wave and if you live in California you know exactly what I am talking about. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA + Report this comment
Posted by Hodders 2008-06-22 12:04:30 .... Good poem, and I was in the mood for it as it's sunny and breezy here. Good job! + Report this comment
Posted by June Eclipsis 2008-06-22 13:16:13 ... Why is this story getting so many bad ratings? Surely, the new people on this site are corrupt. + Report this comment
Posted by sTiCkFiGuRe 2008-06-22 15:18:49 .... This poem should not have the rating it does. But to let you know, mid-night and mid-day are not hyphenated words... but im no English major,,well maybe I am. Gave it a five because I just tore your last poem I read to shreads. + Report this comment
Posted by Amatayo 2008-06-22 18:49:45 How How is it that I can get my credit up. + Report this comment
Posted by resistanceisfreedom 2008-06-22 22:29:32 .... i liked where you went with this. it's just i felt as though maybe you could have expanded this more into a bigger poem, but that's just my opinion. overall it's good like it is as well. + Report this comment
Posted by Pilgrim 2008-07-04 18:07:38 .... This must have been written by the brighter Amatayo! + Report this comment

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