They say when Angels fall

They say they turn to clay

And lose their precious wings

At the dawn of day

I just need someone to hold me

And tell me everything's ok

I just need someone to love me

At the dawn of day

They say that love's a game

They say we all should play

But lose and you will see

There's a price to pay

I just need someone to hold me

And tell me everything's ok

I just need someone to love me

At the dawn of day

Keyword: They Say

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Posted by sTiCkFiGuRe 2008-06-22 07:58:37 .... Who are (they)? Seriously, I've never heard those expressions before. Turn to clay? + Report this comment
Posted by garyowen 2008-06-22 15:26:52 .... Seriously Stick, you have to get out more. + Report this comment
Posted by sTiCkFiGuRe 2008-06-22 15:36:30 .... Stick-please for the love of God, somebody please tell me what the hell that is?..im scared. Wife- The sun stick,,,its the sun. + Report this comment
Posted by resistanceisfreedom 2008-06-22 22:23:04 .... i thought this was good. liked the feelings it evoked. + Report this comment
Posted by Pilgrim 2008-07-04 18:11:59 .... I agree with the first comment. I also wondered who They were. Some comparisons did not fit nor flow well. + Report this comment
Posted by garyowen 2008-07-04 21:29:31 .... I suprized that there are people on the forum that have never heard of the ancient mythical tribe of 'They' This poem was based on a loving father ( the angel ) who sexualy moelsted his child, having done so he fell from grace. It is also said by the learned 'They ' that angels who fall from grace will have their feet turn to clay and so be forever after mere mortal. + Report this comment
Posted by Terry Collett 2008-08-21 11:22:10 .... If people are shown a picture and asked what they see(especially a work of modern art)they will give a different interpretation of what it is they see;so it is with a poem or story. I think this quite good; it has fair theme, a presented well. + Report this comment

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