A Doberman is like a protector

It protects and loves its owner dearly

It is loyal and possessive

If anyone hurts its owner,

That person will know the Doberman's fury

Now the owner trains the Doberman

Teaches it how to guard and watch

The Doberman learns and takes the lesson to heart

The owner is equally protective of the Doberman

It is a sacred bond between protector and protected

The Doberman follows every command

It obeys and carries out each order with precision

It does what it is told and does not protest

For if it protests it will suffer the consequences

And it knows those consequences

Keyword: The Doberman

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Posted by Amatayo 2008-06-21 01:09:34 hMM MADE ME THINK + Report this comment
Posted by brandon_scott 2008-06-21 07:49:47 .... Well written! + Report this comment
Posted by Something Indecent 2008-06-22 17:23:54 .... Those things are scary as shit! But yes nice description of the dobermans loyalty and ferocity. + Report this comment
Posted by Pilgrim 2008-07-04 21:07:57 .... This didn't seem like poetry, I guess, to me, it read more like a commentary. The words seemed like words you find in a book on Dobermans. + Report this comment
Posted by chaabuk 2008-07-23 20:31:07 .... A dog is a faithful animal. You bring it out very well in this poem. Even human beings become selfish but the same can never be said for a dog. They ever remain with their owner as a protector. Thoughtful. + Report this comment

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