I am an assassin hunter of night.
I take payment to snuff out a life.

In no time the target is gone.

One pierce of my blade and the job is done

Alienated from the ones I loved.
Made me turn to the ones I shunned.

I bring about pain and grief.
The profit of death is my feast.

The darkness is a common place.
An empty room full of hate.

Where I belong .
I no longer know.

To the shadows I always go.

Never to be seen by a foe

Waiting for my chance to arrive

His life lost through my eyes

As I move back through the night

Praying no one heard his plight.

Escape is emanate

The gates draw near

Now to only dissappear.

Keyword: Assassin's Creed

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Posted by Zombie Punk 2008-06-20 01:09:46 what i think is you could have made it better, although dont get me wrong, the poem is okay it just seems like you could have done better. (off topic assassin's creed is awesome game) + Report this comment
Posted by Hodders 2008-06-20 03:46:58 .... Shouldn't the last word be 'disappear'? It was OK I guess. + Report this comment
Posted by brandon_scott 2008-06-20 14:00:22 .... I don't think I was too fond of this one. It's a very desolate poem, there's no feeling or emotion. And you misspelled "imminent", if that's the word you were trying to use. + Report this comment
Posted by Xena 2008-06-20 17:03:22 HEY! so this was the poem they based the video game on... you DID know they have a video game of this right? hey you could probably sue them if they didnt ask permission from you + Report this comment
Posted by Amatayo 2008-06-20 17:11:15 Wow Wow I mean god no one likes this poem so I guess the trend that a good movie will have a bad game and a good game will have a bad poem is true. HAHAHAAH And as always thanks everyone for the comments good or bad they show that some one is reading. + Report this comment
Posted by Zombie Punk 2008-06-20 17:13:23 .... Its good, just maybe rewrite it, but what do i know about Poetry... + Report this comment
Posted by Amatayo 2008-06-20 17:19:11 Yeah Well this poem was written last night around twelve o'clock and it sounded good but know that I am reading it I could see where it could be up graded but if I do it know I will never bla bla bla dda adada jer uier upni p[iom I don't care screw it. + Report this comment

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