Hating eyes watching over me so seriously at every hour of the new days,

As many walk past me I can't help but notice their despising of me,

They talk to me in so many ways,

So many that speak words of hatred and regret for I myself.

My life wasn't always like this, so miserable,

In fact this only happened when I was six,

But now to prevent this hatred and these tears is undoable,

For everything has gotten worse.

And now I'm sixteen and feeling dead,

For every night I strain not to weep,

So many hating words have been said and so many tears I have shred,

Please tell me why you have done this to me big brother?

Thank you for reading

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Posted by Amatayo 2008-06-20 00:51:13 ??????? It was coo and I don't want to hate so........... + Report this comment
Posted by Hodders 2008-06-20 03:53:17 .... It was good you kept my attention until the end. I liked it! + Report this comment
Posted by Pilgrim 2008-07-04 21:05:20 .... This seems very personal. I noticed a few spelling errors like, "shred" should be shed. I hope you resolve whatever issues you have with your brother. + Report this comment
Posted by chaabuk 2008-07-23 20:38:23 .... This is sad but the only solution to this would be to come out of your misery. No one has the right to make you feel miserable. So, look within your heart and seek an answer. + Report this comment

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