I am standing here

In the middle of all this utter bliss

I am standing here

Thinking of who I am

And who I am supposed to be

Listening to you and your friends

Trying to make me play pretend

Trying to make me into something I am not

But still I stand here on God's rock

But as your complantes run through my ear

A mist of fear is near

But yet I am still standing here

On God's holy and powerful rock

Keyword: Standing Here

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Posted by resistanceisfreedom 2008-06-19 17:56:58 .... i thought this was good. + Report this comment
Posted by Amatayo 2008-06-20 00:53:27 Umm..... To each his/her own. + Report this comment
Posted by Hodders 2008-06-20 03:54:36 .... It was god but I'm not really sure what you were trying to convey here. + Report this comment
Posted by ThatPsycoArtistFletcher10 2008-06-26 16:40:40 .... I think your very good at peoms (As to your friend making into some thing you are not if i done that or seemed to have tryed that im sorry) + Report this comment
Posted by chaabuk 2008-08-20 22:50:20 .... Lovely. This is a charming piece of writing that I have read in recent times. One must always strive to strike a chord in a reader’s heart. You have achieved it in great measure. Good job. Keep it up. ;-) + Report this comment

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