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A Feeling of Love, Chapter 1


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Written by Candee Walker   
Wednesday, 18 June 2008

It was a normal morning. Breakfast was ok, but could be better. She had a poptart. Never could she eat both of them because they were to sugary to her tastebuds. Whenever she had something sweet she always had to drink something, even if the something had sugar in it. Who was this girl, you ask? She was Lacey Cory as known as Lacey Lori. They called her that based on the fact her middle name was Lori, so everyone called her Lacey Lori. Average girl who could never decide who she was. Her personaities was pretty much two instead of one. She was either the happy go lucky hippie or the black loving emo. Had brown curly thick hair, brownish green eyes, always had her hair in pigtails and wore a pair of Chuck Taylor Converses.

So back to her morning. It was a basic normal Monday, but something was different. It was different because she kept seeing her crush James Kellie staring at her. Was he going to make a move today? They dated in Sept. for like, two weeks and then he dumped her. But lately it seemed he wanted her, he kept flirting with her and it was driving her nuts since she wanted him. She was now on her way to Algebra where she she sat across from him. James was a cutie who had blue eyes, brown bushy hair and wore glasses. They were friends at the moment but every day she was falling more in love with him and he kept chasing her. But never asked her out. Maybe today he would make a move. Who knew? She would just have to go the rest of the day hoping that maybe he would. Why was she feeling that today would be the special day?



Copyright 2008 Candee Walker
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Posted by Xena
2008-06-18 21:25:16
OOH

a good old teenage love story! my favorite.. cant wait for the rest...
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Posted by chaabuk
2008-08-11 21:38:25
Crush

This is a good beginning. Lacey was in love with James and he was flirting with her. I guess, it was actually a crush for both of them. I hope it develops into love later on. Carry on.
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